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26 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:28 am

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kozzmoo wrote:@octa bro um nt experienced nd genius like ya. Sad ...i cant able to find da probs in da trax nd also i always try to appriciate all da artist nd try to say da good thing ,either he/she sing it well or nt ....as um learning now, all this thing ....bt yea i'll try to keep ur words in ma head .....thnx cause u said it directly...

YET, u cud make the following comment in a very recent beat of mine,

kozzmoo wrote:its a sum total of shits jst busted out frm ma pc!!!!!!


Just to remind you, wafi, fiq, octa..they all commented on that same thread and NONE of them said anything like that. if u had a reason to tell me why it was a 'sum total of shits'...then i wud hv totally welcomed u. stop being a hater.

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27 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:30 am

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AK: stop bullyin kids man....

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28 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:33 am

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demonic: lol, how often do i 'bully' ppl? except u of course..and u know it! now i think abt it, u kno wat, i am kinda amazed how u NEVER bashed back at my negative feedbacks even in those early days..lol

kozmoo: learn from demonic (based on what i just said abt him)

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29 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:47 am

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aita shunsi the other day and i'll basically echo what AK said. zara needs a lot of improving to do. i'd personally suggest sticking to writing for now... stay away from the mic and hone your writing first, and once in a while rap em over beats to test the flow n stuff. good luck =D

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30 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:59 am

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Hey myne who said dat um a hater of u....0.o i actually dint lyke da beat u made bt at dat meantime i was lilbit upset on ya foh sm reason ...hey i dun wanna say dat reason bt it hurts me...ny way um sorry foh wat i did myne...

Bt u're kinda harsh wit meh at dat time when i was new to Dr even i dint knew bout da [R] of rap...ur lyk da bigg bro so dis kinda behave hurt me

now pls dont say dat i cant take ur critism warmly bt u know it hurts smtyms....

I always appreciate all da works nd staff of all artist....i blive dat i did a wrong thing wit ya bt i got a taste of ma own.! Nd i do cmnt frm point of view..

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31 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 6:39 am

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awww akay..give da dude a hug!!! *watery eyes*

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32 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 2:01 pm

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:O :O

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33 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:20 pm

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wat is happening here...?? Sad

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34 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Fri Dec 10, 2010 7:44 pm

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drama. soap series. lotsa crying. all the scenes take place in one room. something off the dreaded Zee channel.

anyhow, I need not comment, as I share the same sentiments with AK on this. I understand that you're pretty young, which means, you've got all the time to improve compared to an old croak like me Smile

practice writing, rhyming, a good set of lyrics are useless when delivered badly (not that im saying u did). You've got to follow the beat. Most importantly, you've got to be fluent in speaking the language that you're rhyming with,

eg, u wont catch me spit a bangla verse as I perhaps am the worst bangla language speaker in this forum!

Likewise, if you were to rhyme in english, you've got to have a decent command of it speaking naturally, otherwise, its going to end up like ur reading off a piece of paper, with alot of breakages in between.

Anyhow, practise makes perfect!

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35 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:47 pm

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thanks bro..for ur advice...i'll stick to it...i promise..Smile

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36 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:47 am

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drama. soap series. lotsa crying. all the scenes take place in one room. something off the dreaded Zee channel.

LOL you da man! on this topic, Kozmoo: bhai maf chai, ar jiboneo tomar rap crew er thread e comment korbo na...I had no idea ppl can get this attached to a song or a negative comment. sorry zara for another pointless post, but this shall be my last post and the reconciliation of the epic Zee drama that seems to take over every other thread in DR. Very Happy

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37 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Sun Dec 12, 2010 5:42 am

F.L.O.

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flow flow floww work on that flowwww....one piece of advice that i say to alot of new rappers wen they lack floww...just like a guitarist goes thru guitar tabs n he picks up new songs in order to improve..u gota spit random rap verses to get ur flow running...dueces

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38 Re: CINDERELLA STORY on Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:42 am

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F.L.O. wrote:flow flow floww work on that flowwww....one piece of advice that i say to alot of new rappers wen they lack floww...just like a guitarist goes thru guitar tabs n he picks up new songs in order to improve..u gota spit random rap verses to get ur flow running...dueces


thnx a lot...for ur advice....i'll work on that inshallah....Smile

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