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WE'RE DONE - STRAY

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1 WE'RE DONE - STRAY on Tue Nov 02, 2010 9:42 am

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Back after a while. Just goofing really, I was in a good mood if you couldn't tell. Excuse the poor quality, but yeah. I recommend listening through headphones. Feedback appreciated. Thanks.


http://www.4shared.com/audio/SgVCaljQ/WERE_DONE_-_STRAY.html


Lyrics -

Alright, here's the deal man, I'm just a real man
With some problems, but we all got them
Trials and tribulations
You know that, we gotta face em
And I done some shit that could make you all hate me - hate me
But at the end of the day its everything that made me - made me
You could say that i was really kinda crazy - crazy
I was but I've been back to my senses lately
And now I'm done with that shit, said goodbye to bad bitch
Stray's a beast now baby he's a fucking savage


I could dedicate this to the worst thing that ever happened
If life's like a movie then I'm in the background clapping
I'm just a critic I am with it I'm jus livin this life I'm livin
And don't let no body tell me any different
Uh, yeah - people try to bring me down all the time
But I never keep them on my mind, just steady on my grind
And so ima do what I do, I got nothing to prove
If you're just a hater this is my fuck you

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2 Re: WE'RE DONE - STRAY on Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:37 pm

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Edited (Louder)

http://www.4shared.com/audio/POGGXQdM/Were_Done_-_Stray_-_Edited_-_L.html



Alternate Version (Rerecorded)

http://www.4shared.com/audio/kVpIqb0n/WERE_DONE_-_STRAY_-_ALT.html

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3 Re: WE'RE DONE - STRAY on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:54 pm

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listened to the Alternate Version (Rerecorded). you were going for the whole quasi-singing/rapping thing but couldn't stay with the tone of the melody. got some delivery issues as well. lyrics worked for the feel of the song, no problems here. work on strengthening your delivery and try to understand the beat a lil better. stay up bruh!

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4 Re: WE'RE DONE - STRAY on Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:44 am

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lol, thanks bro. I'll keep that in mind. Smile

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