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Confession pt.1 Rehab

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1 Confession pt.1 Rehab on Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:15 pm

sha1_flyology

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This track here is the 1st part of my project 'confession'. This 1 is called rehab. Its a true life story of mine, I hope ya'll will like it & leave us with ur feedbacks..thank you, Faith.

http://tinyurl.com/2c5tunw

& Here are the lyrics,
*Intro*
Confession, part 1(rehab).. Thru out all the ups & downs & mistakes that I've made, This part, may never fade... But thru the window, the light of hope still comes in to glow...yo, don't make the same mistakes as I did, dont ruin your life... Listen.

*verse 1*
Every morning I wake up & looked at the mirror.
Its a horror, Time to smoke last night's leftover..

this aint over, I'm still here standin I'm still here breathing.
Bt I'm soo fucki'n away, tht I aint even feeli'n, Tears? am I cryi'n?

No, I'm soo sickified, all from inside I Just wanna die,
Fuck reality, its time to get high..

Ya'll want me to be what I cant ever be,
I fucked up badly cant u even fucki'n see??

I tried as hard as I could, what I should.
No life left for me, homie what you would?

Lived up from here on,I Lived on heroine.
I hear my heart beating, time to get this on..

Nothing I have left to smile fo & call my own.
I Thank god, I thank ya'll fo wat ya'll have shown..

**hooks**

let it go,
Got nowhere to move & go.

let it go,
Crack is all I had fo ma flow,

let it go,
All my sufferings I'll never show.

let it go,
Is life is beautiful I'll never know..

*verse 2*

What I wanted, what I got Is a mystery,
My story, Chasin the dragon, my only glory.

I kept It all locked, I kept It all away,
runni'n on the ryt path or goin astray?

All my suffering, the pain tht I couldn't show,
Fears that I had insyd of which no-one will ever know,

Bleeding rays of hope on my love,
or Was It her silhoutte tht I touch??

anticipated happiness were illusions that hurt,
fake love & Tormenting memories of my heart

I couldnt fill the gaps, neither the expectations,
a house built with bricks of depressions, sorrowly expressions,

Regulations, Fucki'n nations, tried to break me into two,
It seemed everything I do, made me look like a fucki'n fool.

But I tried to, Keep a fake smile etched on ma face,
Regressions forced to keep me prayi'n for an addict's death..

**hooks**
let it go,
Got nowhere to move & go.

let it go,
Crack is all I had fo ma flow,

let it go,
All my sufferings I'll never show.

let it go,
Is life is beautiful I'll never know..

**verse-3**

reasons to write this song,1. I have no one to care for or be cared by,2. so that I could remember the horrors of my past, & 3. if i did anything to myself, they would know why...

The trauma is electricuting without a crack dose,
an angel walked in my life & showed me new hope.

She showed me life has colors & CAN be beautiful,
but was i ready fo it or was I just being a fool??

wid drugs, a fake world tht i creatd in ma mind.
Fuki'n moments of happiness is somethn i kudn't find.

Desire to have drugs in veins, all be gone
All that shit was done, seems can b undone.

If I look back its lyk watchi'n a horror muvi,
what I was, What I'd be,its too painful to see..

Causi'n trouble to others,I was nothi'n lyk help,
I could have killed sum1 or better yet myself..

**Hooks**
I'm lettin go,
Got evrywhere to move & go.

I'm lettin go,
hope is now ma flow,

I'm lettin go,
Happiness is wat ill show.

I'm lettin go,
life is beautiful I'll know..

**outro**
I decided to let it go,
I'm left on my own, I promised I'll never use heroine again.
But at times I wasnt even sure if i could change,
My whole body was falling into pieces,
It felt like an earthquake inside me, I wanted crack,
But as my angel of hope stood ryt by my side,
I knew it was worth it, I knew could change,
Now I'm letting go.. now, I'm clean...

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2 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Thu Oct 28, 2010 10:30 pm

Wafi

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all right man...the concept of the song is tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....wait I gotta breath...uh...oooooooooooooo dope!!!Joell ortis did a song like this too...it was bout crack heads...but his one was made in a funny way...still there some little flaws...but since I loved this conept man I say fuck it....I ain't gonna criticise shit...keep it up and keep on grinding best of luck bro!!

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3 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:46 am

WolFizzLA

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listening to it again... i know this one's close to your heart, i just hope this time you stick to your decision n don't let em drugs treat you like a slave again, i liked the concept n enjoyed the track... it wasn't flawless but pretty good... next time you come over to my place i'll show you the flaws so you sound even doper in confession pt 2! keep at it homeboy Smile

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4 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 6:43 am

Octa

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fuck da flaws if ur keeping it real and str8 from the heartt... (y)

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5 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:30 am

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Respect

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6 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:59 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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to good lyrics bro, concept and implementation of those conceptual ideas get a 10/10 ... only a fuck head wud care to disagree, keep up the dope production ! (Y)

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7 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:02 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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to = too in my last post, peace Smile

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8 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 2:26 pm

Wafi

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ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:to good lyrics bro, concept and implementation of those conceptual ideas get a 10/10 ... only a fuck head wud care to disagree, keep up the dope production ! (Y)
of course...now that he ain't an addicted no more...he's a smuggler... Razz Razz ...just kiddin'...

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9 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 4:07 pm

Demonic

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LOVEDDDDDDDDD THIS MAYNNNNN......luv u broda....keep up the gud work....RESPECT.......kinda makes me think wat um doin...and where i stand...

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10 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 5:42 pm

AxZA_FLyology

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awsm stuff.....................................waiting for pt2 What a Face

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11 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:34 pm

Sha-"T"

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now dats some real talk man. Liked it so umma keep the flaws aside. Nice wrk. N yea pull urslf together n stay focusd cuz u kno wat drugs did to u bfo. Stay up.

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12 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 1:30 am

mc shanz

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really nice track...Felt it (Y)

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13 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:04 am

Demonic

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mc shanz wrote:really nice track...Felt it (Y)

where?

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14 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:35 am

SaF-T

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Awsum track bruv....respect..

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15 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:28 pm

sha1_flyology

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Thanks to all of ya fo' ya'r comments...means a lot.
& yea..the 2nd part will be called 'childhood' comin out (most probably) on ma birthday on 21st dec...
now keep em' feeds comin DR.... Very Happy

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16 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:29 pm

sha1_flyology

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Wafi wrote:
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:to good lyrics bro, concept and implementation of those conceptual ideas get a 10/10 ... only a fuck head wud care to disagree, keep up the dope production ! (Y)
of course...now that he ain't an addicted no more...he's a smuggler... Razz Razz ...just kiddin'...

HAHAHA!!! What a Face Howdd'a get me on tht 1?? Shocked

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17 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sat Oct 30, 2010 10:59 pm

Wafi

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sha1_flyology wrote:
Wafi wrote:
ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:to good lyrics bro, concept and implementation of those conceptual ideas get a 10/10 ... only a fuck head wud care to disagree, keep up the dope production ! (Y)
of course...now that he ain't an addicted no more...he's a smuggler... Razz Razz ...just kiddin'...

HAHAHA!!! What a Face Howdd'a get me on tht 1?? Shocked
magic Razz

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18 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:34 am

|GLaB-JaY|

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Respect Homie ... Hats off 2 yu .... cheers FLY Mo' high Nikkah!!! Inshallah i knw ew can ....

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19 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Sun Oct 31, 2010 1:07 am

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got some flow issues here and there. execution also could've been a tad bit better. i liked the second verse more. lastly props for writing honest lyrics.. good to see music coming from a pure place. keep it up bro.

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20 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:12 pm

AxZA_FLyology

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Faith here: thanks mode, I knw I got some probs & will be worki'n on em. Thanks fo the heads up bruv...

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21 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:07 pm

WolFizzLA

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AxZA_FLyology wrote:Faith here: thanks mode, I knw I got some probs & will be worki'n on em. Thanks fo the heads up bruv...

Why didn't you log in from your account? that's creepy Razz

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22 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:08 am

AxZA_FLyology

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aXza here: it was my laptop...and we were busy with stuffs

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23 Re: Confession pt.1 Rehab on Fri Nov 05, 2010 5:27 pm

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love this track............keep it up........

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