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1 "Raat" on Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:31 am

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Allright worked since this morning on this shit and I just finished it...it was painful and olso the ramadan made me damn crazy...but at last it paid off really good...and it feels good that I just did something that I'm proud of...wasn't sure bout this one but mighty mode too told me it sounded good so I'm posting it here... Very Happy Very Happy

please check it out couse I put lots of efforts on this one!

4shared.com/audio/YuKdjZWS/Raat.html

initially the lyrics were written on a beat produced by AK but I just couldn't find the hook catchy enough so I changed the beat...

here are the lyrics:


Hooks x 2


rat er muddhe ami choli
ei rater loghe ami kotha boli
ratrir muiddha ganja taina ondhokarer muiddha bashi
ami ostir khelar muiddha naicha naicha togo majhe thaki
ratrir muiddha bajai neshar bashi


Verse :


ekai boro hoisi ekai din kataisi tora ki bujba
raat tar majhe thaksi jaigga leksi onek kotha
shomajer kutta go kaas theikka khaisi onek choda
tai ami ekhon bisshash dite bhoi kori bujla?

onek kisu deksi onek kisu korte deksi
tai ami choila aisi shanti ektu fira paisi
ekhon ami raat tare banaisi amar kacher shonghi
kharap pola hoia bibeg re bhuila ei pothe cholsi

amar ma amare pagal koy
amar baap amare deikkha onek moja loy
shobai shudu bole je amar ei jibone kono bhaat nai
tai ami raghi ratrer muiddha kotha gaye na laghaia agay jay

na re bhai lagbona togo faltu poramossho
ho ami ei pagal matal mon loya dekmu oi shopno
rap marte chai eita ki etoi kharap jinsih??
tora shob ondho parosh shudhu kothar shate marte bish


Hooks x 2


Verse 2:


taina hisra brishti loghe ratrer majhe choli
amar moton polar to haranor kisu nai
tai amra shob kisu korbar pari
kharap kehala kheilla ajob kotha boli
enek kichu chai ar hip hop re bhalabashi

rastar majhe rokte bhaisha boro hoisi
kharap jinish deksi ar ekhana bhalar joinno aisi
amar genjam bhala laghe na baddho korishna
kan amar loghe loray koira ar tui bhaat pabi na

ami ey shomaj re chudina
togo shopno ami bujhina
ami koita gaan laikkha pay amar shob asha
ami bolina togo bhasha
ganja khay chubay mari togo shomosto koiti faltu chapa


ami bujhina tora amar kas theikka ki chash
ami shudu rap maira uray dimu togo nisshash
amar konthe naiccha uthe akash patal
gaaner loghe mishay rakhi roktakto raagher chita


Hooks x 2


A special thanks to you all for the criticising that you gave it's olso for your advices that I improved so far... Very Happy



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2 Re: "Raat" on Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:03 pm

Wafi

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No feeds on this one??? Crying or Very sad

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3 Re: "Raat" on Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:18 am

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Nyc One Broooooooooooo Whoooooooooooo xD amar onek bala lagse re

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4 Re: "Raat" on Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:06 am

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pretty slick! awesome!

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5 Re: "Raat" on Fri Aug 27, 2010 11:42 pm

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gr8 track man...i really liked this track...n yeah i wanted u to say that the hook of ur track "AGUN" is fire man.....Keep up the good wrk..

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6 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:44 am

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NICE TRACK !!

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7 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:56 am

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Rispetto sta arrivandoooooooooooo continua cos fr^^ se potessi avrei continuato ankio con la musica.. kentu hujur hoya gesi.. ar gaan gaitam na re NS Game Over

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8 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:33 pm

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MC NS wrote:Rispetto sta arrivandoooooooooooo continua cos fr^^ se potessi avrei continuato ankio con la musica.. kentu hujur hoya gesi.. ar gaan gaitam na re NS Game Over

ahahahah dhurrrrrrrrr....ma che dici??guarda he te prima de smette almeno un feat. co me o devi f!!!

@Ak,MC shanz,and Castic M!k
thanks a lot guys!!todays my birthday and your apreciation towards my music is the best gift I could ever recieve!!thanks!! Very Happy

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9 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:52 pm

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wow HapPy biRthday thn man....... Very Happy

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10 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:00 pm

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mc shanz wrote:wow HapPy biRthday thn man....... Very Happy
thanks man Very Happy Very Happy

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11 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:11 pm

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today's ur b'day ? :S happy b'day man !!

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12 Re: "Raat" on Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:40 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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nyc track man !! verses were dope, but chorus ta oto bhalo chilo lyk ur other trax, but good progress nwyz Smile
im hoping to see sum real dope shits from u man !! stay up!

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13 Re: "Raat" on Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:46 am

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[quote="Wafi"]
MC NS wrote:Rispetto sta arrivandoooooooooooo continua cos fr^^ se potessi avrei continuato ankio con la musica.. kentu hujur hoya gesi.. ar gaan gaitam na re NS Game Over

ahahahah dhurrrrrrrrr....ma che dici??guarda he te prima de smette almeno un feat. co me o devi f!!!

Un Feat? xD xD Inshallah

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14 Re: "Raat" on Sun Aug 29, 2010 2:42 am

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good track brooooooo.....Very Happy:D




















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15 Re: "Raat" on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:02 am

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thank ya Skull b!!!!




















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16 Re: "Raat" on Sun Aug 29, 2010 11:14 am

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btw, i listened to it several times and everytime the beat kind of irritated my ears..idk wat's wrong with it..it's prolly jst the type of rap u did..that didn't go with the beat's mood.

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17 Re: "Raat" on Sun Aug 29, 2010 1:33 pm

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AKProductions wrote:btw, i listened to it several times and everytime the beat kind of irritated my ears..idk wat's wrong with it..it's prolly jst the type of rap u did..that didn't go with the beat's mood.
maybe yes but it's surely better then the one I was doin' on your beat...if you want I can make a lil' demo of what was coming out....verses sounded dope on ya beat but the hook was a mess...I juz couldn't put a good hook on it...

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18 Re: "Raat" on Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:08 am

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oh cool got it.

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19 Re: "Raat" on Tue Aug 31, 2010 2:53 pm

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AKProductions wrote:oh cool got it.
aite
sooooo....any1 else heard this shit??wuold love to know what ya think... Very Happy

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20 Re: "Raat" on Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:57 pm

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joss trk .........3/4 bar por por sunle ektu nesha nesha lagse........odd feeling ....next jara sunbe tader ke ai advise dilam 3/4 bar sunle trk ta onno rokom lage.. Shocked

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21 Re: "Raat" on Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:06 pm

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Hazard wrote:joss trk .........3/4 bar por por sunle ektu nesha nesha lagse........odd feeling ....next jara sunbe tader ke ai advise dilam 3/4 bar sunle trk ta onno rokom lage.. Shocked
thanks f listening dude...and...uhm...lol this track made ya high???lol...

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22 Re: "Raat" on Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:44 pm

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Wafi wrote:
Hazard wrote:joss trk .........3/4 bar por por sunle ektu nesha nesha lagse........odd feeling ....next jara sunbe tader ke ai advise dilam 3/4 bar sunle trk ta onno rokom lage.. Shocked
thanks f listening dude...and...uhm...lol this track made ya high???lol...


man in shocked too n still shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

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23 Re: "Raat" on Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:54 pm

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lol I posted up the direct link of my folder...that's why it got so few downloads...lol...
here is the good link
4shared.com/audio/YuKdjZWS/Raat.html
check it out!!!and now the link it's fixed...sorry my bad!!

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24 Re: "Raat" on Tue Sep 07, 2010 6:50 am

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lol..so anybody else got high on this shit??

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25 Re: "Raat" on Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:53 am

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gud track dud.....keep it up..............









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