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BD PRIDE Young Sp1ce ft RedBoy (Bangla Rap)

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1 BD PRIDE Young Sp1ce ft RedBoy (Bangla Rap) on Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:35 am

Young Sp1ce

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When I first started off it was just for repping our culture. This is the first track I ever did about a year ago. Though I would prolly do it better now, I stilled like the idea behind it. feedback.

track:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_b8eHnqhGoI&feature=related


Lyrics:

(poem)
Take what they want, they can have as they will
All my worldly possessions, they can steal
Yet the blood on my land, my sweat upon it
The memories I have with it are not for sale.

Try to take my land,
I will resist
Its my pride and honor
Without it, My life's in mist.

(Start)
"BD in ma heart and im repping ma pride
from the fields of green to the blood so red,
theko, AMAR SHONAR BANGLA AMI THOMAI BHALO BASHI
Its engraved in ma heart nothing compares to this

The people of ma country stand strong united,
lik anything beatz one stick, buh we a bundle of "Bashes"
Nothing beats this, its so legitimate
You can hear tha cry of a mother's sacrifice, you feel it?

"Amar Desher Manush che nilo shadinotha,
jea Bangla hobe amader matri basha
Ai shopno puron kora hoiche ajke,
Bangla rap shunajache amar muke"

Basha tule nichi and im proud to say
im spreading the werd of Bangla damn everyday
swimming in tha shores down south Coxz Bazar
Lal shurjo be rising lik tha pothaka

And we celebrate the year of 1971
thek, thek how we under one giant flag,
bashi tho shuni lik missles of pride shot of
dolz hittin of vibrantly..
hundreds of soldier marching on u feel me?

Chorus:
"Jekani thaki, Jeno mone porre jai
Shai metho poth, morre deke nia jai
Shonar Bangla, Oi Shonali dhane
Poulli Bhudu Prane, Kotho asha anne

Maji dher gaan, ar bouler shur
Bangali prothi prane gatha...
(Chorus end)

Now we take it bak a little aite? Here we go!

Shapla phuls growin most everywhere
intensifying the beauty of my motherland
Illish Mach comes here by the dozens and more
Its lik watching a freaking water festival..

And Ill stand in the fields, tell my fellow chashi
God blessed me with the extent of such a beauty
Now we take it back, And then examine the view
I couldnt trade this in for anything new.

I got history on this soil, I got blood too
Nothing here seperating me from ma hood
People walking around in colors of fall
and I enjoy the Boishak Festival

I see ma country for its been through
What it survived just for me and you
Naive souls cannot estimate,
the blood shed on this land, jea tha stain of its red

Roktho lal ar Praner Jobuj
Pothaka tho ure amar mothon
Jekanai jai, tane amar ai mon
Bangladesh, Amar Ma, Jea, agai cholo

Kothai jabe, eta amrai janbo
Gali Galaj theme, etai chentha koron
Ma'r Bhasha, tule niachi akon
Amarder jonno, hobe desh puron..

Ei ektai desh je diache etho roktho,
Bhashar jonno, Rokha please Koro,
Amader Ithihash, Shobai Jane Jeno
Orelse all we fought for will be lost in sorrow..

(Message)
Hey this Young Spice
This track's for all my bengaliz out there
No matter which corner of the earth we're on
Our mother tongue keeps us at the shores of Bengal

Yall keep that in mind...And rep tha BD Pride

Spice Out..

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1.the track quality is just off dude. the instrumental's crackling bad, ie, obviously clipping, ie, passing the 0db threshold in your tracking software.
2.Inappropriate usage of fx on the vocals (i cant be specific on what exactly was used), but theres just too much airiness.
3.Doesnt sound like theres any mixing done.

On the other hand,
your rhyming's okay, delivery could be improved but as you said, it was your first track, no doubt, plenty of room for improvement.

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Young Sp1ce

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^ yea i knoe exactly wat ur talking about..honestly it was like ma very first track, b4 i knew anything about rhyming or recordin. thnx for tha feed.

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