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[Soft Rock] Losin' Myself__Yalmai (Demonic) [DOWNLOAD NOW]

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Demonic

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Hey there people...this tym im here with sumthin new...as in...this is a type of music that i didnt eva do b4, soft rock, ...and the lyrix of this song is very close to my heart...hope u like it as much as i do.....Smile

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LYRICS:

hold ma hand as we watch the sunset
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself
hold ma hand as we walk down this path
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself


As we stand in this mist
As u Feel the soft breeze
Wen u luk to in2 ma eyes
the wrld stops 2 exist


hold ma hand as we watch the sunset
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself
hold ma hand as we walk down this path
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself


I been seein dem dreams, wit ma eyes open wide
i dunno wat they mean, don care wat they hide
with u infront of me there is nuthin i wud eva see
with u by my side there is nuthin i wud eva need


hold ma hand as we watch the sunset
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself
hold ma hand as we walk down this path
cz im losin myself, cz im losin myself

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Please leave ur feeds below...so that i can improve......Smile

YALMAI....

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[P][R][O]

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I Suggest you record with a better mic because this song needs firm clarity as it is an alternative jam.Pretty good song.


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WolFizzLA

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holy fuck dude! that was even better than ur RnB stuffs... really feelin this! awesome lyrics as well... this needs to be in ur album, with a better mic it will be like whoa!
this 1 touched my heart

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Demonic

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PRO: yeh ait i'ma do that..thnx man......
Wolf: mayn..u always make ma day......thnx a lot man...fo always supportin me.....Very Happy Very Happy

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I already told u in FB.....stop making online release so often n go to a quality producer.....as usual, awesome track man......

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Demonic

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i cant cntrl it man.....i get a lil bit of tym...and i make a song..and then i jst hav to share it........Razz

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[P][R][O]

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and thus,i remain a Demonic fan!Drop an album bro,hit khabe.I always been telling you your voice is a gem


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Demonic

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*ahem ahem*.......lol........

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Wafi

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Demonic wrote:PRO: yeh ait i'ma do that..thnx man......
Wolf: mayn..u always make ma day......thnx a lot man...fo always supportin me.....
\this is some dope ass shit man...now I don't wanna be ass licker or something but I like you're stuff...and if you need quality stuffs I got what you needs...of course ita ain't pro but if wanna get quality shit I can make record shit from time to time just becouse you really deserve it...if you need to record fo free let me know...;-)

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mc shanz

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i like this track (Y) awesome singing n touchy lyric...

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AKProductions


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u made sum changes from wat u showed me. whispering adlibs wud be soo perfect for this song! those whispers cud've been just reciting sum love poems or something very soothingly.

ur vocal quality hasn't improved as much as it should. vocal quality can be trained (u missed sum notes when going from one line to another at places..particularly when the song dropped at 1:32-1:36ish)...if u practice u can gain more control...u need to touch the listener's heart..lyrics was awesome but the finishing delivery touch was missing..varying up ur tone/intensity of ur vocal, making sure u r not getting lazy with the last notes of a line..which a lot of singers tend to do...things like that.

good catchy track overall but plenty of place to improve. and oh, i feel like ur lyrics r always almost same with different words lol

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AKProductions


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oh and between..if u SERIOUSLY want to improve through forum comments, then post these songs in some popular rnb forums (this track is all english so that shdn't be an issue)...i'm sure u'll meet real rnb singers who knows shit (as opposed to me lol) and they can actually help u instead of getting ten thousand "you rock bro! awesome track" comments lol.

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dude u r jus inspiring me to sing......can u teach me singing?

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rash666

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OMG...i got emotional...totally emotional!
i gues...frm tht...u can gues how much i liked it!
n... i, obviously, will go for the glitches...cuz this cud hav been more perfect...1)the sound quality cud hav been betr....2)wat were those noises at the end? u shud hav cut it! thts all!

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Demonic

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@Wafi: miya tumi bangadesh'e thako age koiba na....ajib.....

@Shanz: thnx man

@Ak: i read ur shit jst once ...so i hv no idea wat it meant..i gotta talk to u....Razz...and yeh i wanted to do that whisperin adlips thing...bt got too lazy....Sad....yeh i tend to do that....

@rash: i left the things at the end fo sum rezen ...i felt it made the track sound kinda 'real'....Razz....yeh im wack..Razz

@Ishan: miya tomare koi NSU'te dekha korte...koi thako bhai...lomba chikna dhola pola're bhoi pau....tomar id card niya jabe kintu..Razz

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Norwester Sharod

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maiya go moto dress matchin na korle ki aar hoy?
Razz

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Demonic wrote:
@Ishan: miya tomare koi NSU'te dekha korte...koi thako bhai...lomba chikna dhola pola're bhoi pau....tomar id card niya jabe kintu..Razz

vai ami goto 1 month dhoira NSU jaina....hospital e asilam....ekta chhotto operation hoise....apatoto bashai e thaki....

btw....who u talkin bout?

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Slaught Daddy

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demonic!!!!! ar kisu bolte hobe? Razz chorom hoise boss ....nw if u can do the soft rock u can do the alternative/hard rock too Razz lets get working on the old beat then lmao

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Castic M!k

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nic track bro

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Demonic

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thnx sanj and castic.....Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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Norwester Sharod

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Slaught Daddy wrote:demonic!!!!! ar kisu bolte hobe? Razz chorom hoise boss ....nw if u can do the soft rock u can do the alternative/hard rock too Razz lets get working on the old beat then lmao

demonik baal kore...oidin studio te jaa korlo! Mad

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Demonic

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yeh....im wack.....im very VERY wack.......Sad

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KC

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Very touching! loved the lyrics, u got a good voice... quality wasn't that good but i digged this!

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Demonic

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thnx a lot KC..means a lot.Smile

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