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<3 Dw NakiB 1sT HUt officiaL RnB tracK wTh LIl BanNEr G.s.R

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LIl BanNEr

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HeY wHTz gUD peopLE... LIl BanNEr N dW NakiB is bak wth aN huTst track thiz summer....checK it oUt...

Dw NakiB 1sT HUt officiaL RnB tracK wTh LIl BanNEr

linK 
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peacE.......HopE u peoplE gonna fall n lovE after hearIn thiz tracK.xD
lyriC
Hummmmmmmmmmmmm
Dw NakiB……….May tumi
fira aso amari kasa, ami parbona tumaka sara thakte

Chola asO amari kasa,
                      vaya felo ai bondi
salatake

Tumaka ,  prothom dekar por thaka 
                              Amar ai mon take neacho kara
maY, tumi chola aso na 
                 cholo ak sat aura jai arak
jogota……….


HOOKX
And when
it feels like you can’t go on, just keep your head so strong,
                                       ust live your life ’til the end. Just
breathe in the sweet air, feels like you’re already there,                              
no one can hold you down.


 Lil BanNEr…………..
Hey baby
girl just look at the sky

tz green
hutty day wth a
cute lil smile
 don’t through me away don’t push me away
                                             Cuz I m UR 1sT love……

wHeN I sEE u was afraid to meet,
                                when I meet u I was
afraid to kiss u

                           when I kissu,                                       OOOO yea

Now tat I
love u grl, Now tat I kiss U grl

                            I m afraid to lose u gRl 
waNA Go down
wTh U gRl, wana FlY sO high wTh u

Now take
mE to the magical world where we  
Can be happy together…… 

HOOKX

And when
it feels like you can’t go on, just keep your head so strong,

ust live your life ’til the end.

Just
breathe in the sweet air, feels like you’re already there,

                                       no one can hold you down.

 Lil BanNER………..lasT verse….

U were ma strength when I feel so weak 
were ma voice when I cudnt see 
U were ma u we eye when I cudnt see 
u were the only one who had faith in me….. 

Now tat I
love u grl, Now tat I kiss U grl  I m afraid to lose u gRlchorus repeat.........peacE

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LIl BanNEr

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cmnt plz ..............

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ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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wow, real improvement man....banner was good, even if the chorus was from the 1 in rockitpro Razz
but the verses n singing conception was something good Smile

dw shudn't of gone fast on a trak lyk this...:\...daz y or ta enjoy kora jay nai

but the trak is good, n da ending was nyc, even if its been used a few tyms Razz lol

nyc nyc, LOADZ of improvement from the last briggas, me lyki ! Very Happy

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LIl BanNEr

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thankX Smile

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Mr.Bling

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nice,but it wud've been bttr if dw went a bit slow,den his words wud've been clear,nd da flow wud sound bttr.ne wayz,keep doin ur thang

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Castic M!k

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ya nic track and i also agree wid bling abt dw

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SaD1k

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Hmmmmm da trak is gud.... Really i neva thot to hear this kinda from u....Nice keep it up...

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LIl BanNEr

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thankX GuyZ need MO cmnT .........

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[P][R][O]

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Retune speed was not correct.What Pitch did you use for the autotune?Didn't like the accent used in chorus.Dw flow should've been smoother rather than fast.But somehow i liked this track


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LIl BanNEr

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LOw maLE...pitch..... scale C major ...(effecT use BY T paiN)
thankX Fo uR cmnT bRo..........

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fiquetional


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u want an honest feedback?

well here goes. if u want to make rnb, pls sing without autotune.
autotune can make a tone deaf dog sound nice.
singin takes skills.

also, fx on vocals are pointless when there isnt any clarity. ur just making a muffled vocal sound more muddier.

why dont u go to utube n find "baby crying autotune". even that sounds melodious.
then u'll get the drift.

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fiquetional wrote:u want an honest feedback?

well here goes. if u want to make rnb, pls sing without autotune.
autotune can make a tone deaf dog sound nice.
singin takes skills.

also, fx on vocals are pointless when there isnt any clarity. ur just making a muffled vocal sound more muddier.

why dont u go to utube n find "baby crying autotune". even that sounds melodious.
then u'll get the drift.

word. and oh, 90% rappers here don't ever want honest/can absorb honest feeds (they'll either be like "u show me how to do it then" or something like that..but i'm sure u know the drill lol)...everyone wants to hear...'sick track man..i'm sure ur next track's gonna sound even more hot'.



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TheRiddler

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i don c how this is n r& track. and fiquetional is ryt... u guys gotta step up... i donno y everybody's sayin it's gud... the autotune y'all used was distuned n distorted in most places..and pronounciation has fake accents all over... i don mean to be rude bt u wanted honest feeds...u guyz gotta improve...

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i haven't commented like i used to in a while..so here u go:

1) As fiq said, get rid of autotune. it doesn't sound any better if the foundation aint there.
2) ur pronunciation was pretty bad and it's not any difficult lyrics that u can mess up bengali pronunciation like that.
3) i cudn't listen thru the whole thing..it's impossible..please learn how to sing before u wanna do rnb. this is not singing.
4) rapping sounded weird to me..it sounded like that rapper was trying to break the guiness records of mumbling most words in a bar..thanks to 'tempo' option.
5) Good luck, but u guys need more than that.

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mc shanz

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AKProductions wrote:i haven't commented like i used to in a while..so here u go:

1) As fiq said, get rid of autotune. it doesn't sound any better if the foundation aint there.
2) ur pronunciation was pretty bad and it's not any difficult lyrics that u can mess up bengali pronunciation like that.
3) i cudn't listen thru the whole thing..it's impossible..please learn how to sing before u wanna do rnb. this is not singing.
4) rapping sounded weird to me..it sounded like that rapper was trying to break the guiness records of mumbling most words in a bar..thanks to 'tempo' option.
5) Good luck, but u guys need more than that.

Razz Agree with AK.......Step your game up...

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LIl BanNEr

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ThanKX Fo listeNIn & uR HonesT fEEdz.... inshallaH samnA arO joss KOrBO...  Smile

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fiquetional


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thats the spirit!!!

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LIl BanNEr

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N thank u guYz Fo supportIN Razz

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DwaynE NakiB WadE

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Gud wit the honest feeds....but sometimes don do something that is unworthy and discouraging....mean luk at the thing Ak did

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DwaynE NakiB WadE

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I want to respect this guy but i dunno....I told this guy that I don use the Fucking tempo thrice....but he doesnt get it....man ur brain might be developed...but ur personality is still immature

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DwaynE NakiB WadE

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I cant teach u A unless u forget B man....man um saying this coz it hurts a lot...coz ekta track korrar jonno onek kosto kori....after dat u end up wit irrelevant komments....dis wont help u man...I still want to respect u but think twice of option A than B

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DwaynE NakiB WadE

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one last thing....I challenge any motherfucker to come and watch me spitting fast and see if I really use tempo...I swear to GOD that I dunt use it...I swear to the fucking Rap lord too....I swear to everybodys "non virgin" moma dat i don use it....if u stil don get me...i rilly don give a shit nomore

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so I got this message in fb:

"yo sum GSR or sm rookie dog's bitin ur ass on dr... go tell him what's
what... i don c how "raappin fast" is a good thing hell i don even c how

it matters lol...chek it he's hillarious man...
"

the fellow rapper who just wrote that pretty much summed it up. how does
rapping fast matters?! dude, ask the best rappers out there..whoever u
think is the best...it's all abt LYRICS, FLOW and EMOTIONS..well for
beginners: CLARITY..rapping fast does not matter or make u a better
rapper. also...don't expect to get criticisms in life without getting
negative comments.

btw, i'm listening to this track again and i like the melody lol. but the rap is still extremely horrible. i didn't understand a thing u said....(don't tell me to look at lyrics..lyrics is for girls who want to memorize the song..any listener shd be able to understand the song w/o lyrics).

abt tempo: okay so u didn't use it to increase it up? cool..then use the tempo option and decrease ur tempo couple steps down (from the zero level considering u didn't use tempo)..that way listeners may be able to understand u...maybe.

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dwayne : what do you mean by Fucking tempo thrice? goodness, ur so hyped up that you have to post one after another consecutively. chill.

"but sometimes don do something that is unworthy and discouraging....mean
luk at the thing Ak did"

- most of the time, the most inexperienced fellow will give you all the sweet words you want to hear. Each one of you blind telling the other blind that oh that shit looks good. How's that going to help any development when you think any criticism is unworthy? If you feel that something is unworthy, maybe those people ought to change their perception.

- spitting fast is just that. spitting fast. If you cant flow to the beat, what is the point? Im not saying you cant flow to the beat, but whoever it may be, spitting fast isnt at all fantastic if everything sounds off. So dwayne, u DONT use tempo. How's that? how do you intend to make a song if u dont use tempo
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NEWSFLASH : EVERY AUDIO PROJECT STARTS WITH A TEMPO.
whether its a 4/4 beat, a 3 count beat or whatever.

Unless you're talking about classical or orchestral pieces, they come from another school of thought, and even then, there's still a tempo when they are to be recorded.

I wholeheartedly agree with AK on the fact that fast rapping isnt gonna cut it without clarity. Might as well mumble all the way, if nobody understands you, due to that person's inability to enunciate well, then the onus is on that person to fix his raps.

you're just being plain rude with your non virgin moma n shit, now that is uncalled for.

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fiq bro: I've been on DR for long enough to get used to this type of "cussing" and immaturity. they think they're all that and will show the least gratefulness to people who actually identifies shit that they can work on to make their tracks better...it's okay let it go haha.that's why i dont comment on tracks unless someone requests me to or for this instance i kinda felt like.

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