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In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R

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1 In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:12 pm

LIl BanNEr

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HeY Yoo sUp hoMiE... aFter The bIggest concert of hipHOp jatii 2010 we r agaIn bacK wth aN old tracK oF LInkiN ParK tatZ Iz

...................................In THE EnD..................................
We hVE coverEd Thiz tracK.... i HPe InshallaH yOU all Gonna LOVE It.



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LYRIc:
one thing i dont know Y
It doesn’t even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind, I designed this rhyme
To explain in due time
All I know
time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down to the end of the day
The clock ticks life away
so unreal
Didn’t look out below
Watch the time go right out the window
Trying to hold on but didn’t even know
Wasted it all just to
Watch you go
I kept everything inside and even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time when I tried so hard

cHORUs

AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR UTBO TUMADER MAJA 
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR KUJA NIBO AMAR OBOSTA
VERSe 2

One thing, I don’t know whyIt doesn’t even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind, I designed this rhyme
To remind myself how
I tried so hard
In spite of the way you were mocking me
Acting like I was part of your property
Remembering all the times you fought with me
I’m surprised it got so (far)
Things aren’t the way they were before
You wouldn’t even recognize me anymore
Not that you knew me back then
But it all comes back to me
In the end
You kept everything inside and even though I tried, it all fell apart
What it meant to me will eventually be a memory of a time when I tried so hard

CHORUS
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR UTBO TUMADER MAJA 
AI DENAR SASA AMI ABAR KUJA NIBO AMAR OBOSTA


I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
For all this
There’s only one thing you should know
I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
For all this
There’s only one thing you should know
CHORUS 2..................................................................
PeacE........

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2 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:16 pm

LIl BanNEr

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feedZ plz ............ Hpe YOu all LikE IT 

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3 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:01 pm

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rap verses were aite, considering the fact that it was a cover n the verses were quite easy ya could've done a better job, but don't get me wrong it was kinda good, but what's with the chorus? ai denar sasa ami abar utbo tumader maja- i didn' quite get the meaning, did u guys try to say- ei diner sheshe ami abar uthbo tomader majhey?

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4 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Wed Jun 30, 2010 8:04 pm

LIl BanNEr

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ei diner sheshe ami abar uthbo tomader majhey....yea Smile ...i tried ma besT n i tried so hrd n gone so far ..tat waz hard fo me, tatz  y i had added a new chorus...
n thankx fo listeniN Smile

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5 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:55 am

LIl BanNEr

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need more cmnT 

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6 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:13 am

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gud

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7 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:02 pm

LIl BanNEr

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thankX Smile

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8 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:13 pm

mc shanz

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verses = okay

chorus = when it started i was like then dude verses were good but chorus ta bhoot bhoot lagse..(to me don't knw bout others) do 1 thing if possible do it again n dnt make the chorus like this do it simple as LP (comparing to this Razz ) am tellin u ppl gonna like it....

Besta luck man (Y)

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9 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 5:16 pm

M@D

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100% agree wid u shanz bro . banner bro dont take it negetively the chorus really weird ...... make it again bro and make it simple .

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10 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:23 pm

LIl BanNEr

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hmm sURE Smile

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11 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:00 pm

DwaynE NakiB WadE

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moRe FeedZ neeDed WherE IZ PRO, aK & RiddLEr.................. waiTiN Fo thr cmnTz 


peacE

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12 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:02 pm

TheRiddler

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verses were ok but cud have been better executed <<< clarity needed not in ur voice bu t i think the environment u record in needs to be quieter...

verses were still good...

chorus is what messed it up....

good attempt ..keep it up... i don wanna go in2 technical stuff coz this is a cover... peace

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13 Re: In THE EnD [[rEmAsTErEd]] G.s.R on Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:55 am

DwaynE NakiB WadE

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THANkx Fo UR cmNt RiddlEr BrO Smile samNa inshallaH arO joss KorbO 

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