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Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!]

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1 Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:27 am

Wafi

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Here is my last song...

hope you'll like it!!


4shared.com/audio/QcA9Qzgw/Agun.html


Here are the lyrics:

Verse 1


janina manina koto kichu je pure jabe
ei ragh ei agun amake dhonksho kore felbe
nisshashe ojana kotha gore tulbe
bujhina manina ar koto kichu korbe
amar monon ba manushigota she ki bujbe?
she to shudu amar bithre tile tile jolbe
amar protiti diner shongo ei agun
she to bujhena je ami shudu ekti manush
kono chinta chara amar bithre jolte thake
okritoggo bhabhe amar chetona chire tane
mone hoy jeno she amake ekdin fire pabe
she chetonar theke je ami palie ghechi
tar folafol ki jinish ta ekhon ami dekhi
koshto ki jinish ta ekhon bujhi ami beshi
ekti shesh nisshash ekti ganer muddhe felo
ja ei agun khoy kore mar kache reke ghelo



Hook x2


agun moner majhe jole
mathar bithre ure
agun amar bhitre bole
agun amar shate chole
ragher moton kotha purie
agun amar ei shure



Verse 2


ei chondo ta merefellam
janaja shuru koro
koto kotha je shunlam
ar koto bolo
bithre onek jole aghun
gan ta pure ghelo
beshi chotto ekti kotha
onek boro bisshash
asha gula leko
aguner boddo dhoka
furie jay nisshash
nay kono rokkha
amar bithre ja ache
kew parbe na
moner majhe rakte
kew manbena
rakhina manina koto agun je jole
ure jay pure jay amar moner bithore
jolche ei agun ratrir ontore
tomra ki bujba kotha theke ami
tomra ki ki chino na jano koshto ki jinish
ofuranto alo jole aguner majhe
kache thake
ragh pure jay aguner shate
protiti lekha konder muddhe bhashe



Hook x2


Verse 3


bhobisshote ki ache ta pura ta pura ojana
din furye jay pay ekti shunno kotha
jighesh korona keno eto agun jole
shudu mone reko je ei konto ekane ure
ekti kotha shune ekti chotto gaan pure
shey shanti je amar kach theke koto dure
rokter obhiman chubie dilam ei shure
jaw nisshasher shate kotha ghula choraw
ay tibro agun ke shanti moton purte daw
urte daw hat ghule akasher dike uthaw
ondhokarer shate ei shurer majhe hati
chetona die agun ujjol kore ami bhashi
ofuranto nisshasher spondhone ami kadi
ojana moner kotha amar bitrhe lukie rakhi
aguner tale tale ami chondo take mari
amar ekhon pure jete hobe ami ekhon ashi



Hook x2

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2 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:59 pm

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ur lyrix r always so beautiful....ur flow needs a lil more wrk tho..yer almost der jst a lil more wrk..Very Happy...bt tha hooks were pretty tyt...

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3 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:17 pm

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ok... ur improvin again MashAllah... i like this... i like the lines on da 1st verse "kono chinta chara amar bithre jolte thake
okritoggo bhabhe amar chetona chire tane" coz theres kind of little singing-tune to it...
bt don try it too much ..it's kind of a risk...

Hooks are simply beautiful!!!... good idea with the wide panning u did on the hooks makes it sound HARD HITTIN!...

among problems i'd say... there are some problems with the adlibs overlappin in one or 2 places... in the 2nd verse....
and what equipment are u using? condenser with a preamp? coz the whole track sounds kinda muffled up which it shudnt if ur using a concenser and a pre-amp or any good soundcard... u kno abt hi-mid-lows obviously.... well it sounds like the hi and lo were brought down which gives the track that muffled up ...ummm...unclear feelin.... it shoud be sharp and crisp u kno....

and thank God u didnt use autotune on this1... forget autotune man... u shud go for this kinda energetic hookz...
overall gr8 improvement MashAllah....bt dont stop now coz u got a long way to go and u got the potential to make it to the end...keep up!

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4 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:39 pm

MC NS

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bella li!!! spacca il pezzo pero secondo me potevi migliorare delle cose nel senso ke il testo ritornello e apposto ma forse nelL'eQuiliz hai tenuto leggermente piu alto i medi.. xo complimenti

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5 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:05 pm

Wafi

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thanks guys for the feed backs...it's funny how a track made in half an hour became a good track...thanks guys for the support...and in this one I should improve the mixing but since I did this one in a hurry I didn't have the time though....mc ns you're right I didn't spent much time on the mixing...maybe I'll try to fix shit up...when I have the time...

And yeah bout the mid and shit...I tried to give it a vintage flavour but since I did it in a hurry i messed up everything bout the quality..the next one's gonna be crystal clear...thanks ridler you're absolutely right bout the mixing...I used a behringer 101 preamp and a proel condensor mic with the fast track audio interface...initially the quality was pretty tight I was amazed my self but when I started to do the mastering I messed up everything...and I didn't have much time...however I decided as Ridler said to forget outotune....

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6 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:33 pm

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I like this track....Lyric is rilly impressive...........good wrk man u r improved (Y)

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7 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:33 pm

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wad up with this last track thing ?

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8 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:10 pm

Wafi

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mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?
what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...

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9 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Fri Jun 11, 2010 2:02 am

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Wafi wrote:
mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?
what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...


lol nah man i mean u wrote that here is my last track so i asked y last ? u'll not drop any tracks nemore ? :S

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10 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Fri Jun 11, 2010 9:05 pm

Wafi

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mc shanz wrote:
Wafi wrote:
mc shanz wrote:wad up with this last track thing ?
what you mean???you were refferrring to the fast track??/if so it's an external audio intaerface which porpuse is to convert analog signal to digital for good home recording of course is not pro stuff but it's really good for any rapper...


any way thanks for the feeds...


lol nah man i mean u wrote that here is my last track so i asked y last ? u'll not drop any tracks nemore ? :S
lol...With last track I meant last track that I made...

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11 Re: Agun {oldschool flavah} [Download now!!] on Wed Jun 16, 2010 6:22 am

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ok guys...I remastered it...now it should sound crystal clear...sharp without that muddy effect..now it's totally fixed... 4shared.com/audio/QcA9Qzgw/Agun.html
download and enjoy...and remember to leave some feeds!!!

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