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"Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION]

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1 "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Tue Jun 01, 2010 3:36 am

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Allright guys,since many said that I should keep the lyrics I made another song with them and this is the definitive version!!

4shared.com/audio/6rY72Onj/Tarar_dike.html

Verse 1\\\\
Hooks---} Bangla
Verse 2/

Verse 3- First bunches of bars in English the rest in Italian

Lyrics,vocals mixing and mastering by me.
Beat by Rockitpro.com

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Here are the lyrics:

Starting

Ekti kotha tarar majhe leko

Verse 1

ekti boro kota ekti choto nisshash
nai amar kache bindumatro bishaash
ekti din jay ekti gaan ashe
koshter maje amar ei monta bhashe
tarar arale ei chondo akashe thake
chetonar nodir majhe gan ta kadhe
ar koto koshto ar koto shojjo korbee
kobe tara ghulo amar moner majhe porbe
ei koshto shojjo korte parina
ei chondo kibhabe je oto ojana
moner majhe ojana leka abriti kori
osposhto chetona die gaan ghul bhori
tomra ar ki chaw ar ki shunte chaw??
ekti nisshash ekti gan ekti bisshash
ekti kotha ekti din ekti rath ashe
protiti khonde obhimaner muddhe bhashe



Hook

ekti nisshash moner bithre rako
ekti kotha tarar dike lekho


Verse 2


tarar majhe koshto gulo like beray
ojana kotha amar moner majhe lkai
tumiki bujhba amar bithre ki ache
onek kichu bolo kintu amake ki chino
tomar jogoter theke ami pura bhinno
ami to hotashar kole konto nachay
ami tara dike amar mon die chillay
tumi ba ki parba amar moton cholte
tumi ki parba amar moton kotha bolte?
hoitoba ekdin shanti fire pabo
sheydin porjonto ekhaney ami thakbo
kolija kete amar ganer majhe marbo
protiti nisshasher majhe koshter muddhe bashi
amar konto tomader monke dey fashi
mone reko amar kotha ar koto kichu shunba
ar shomoi nai ami ekon ashi


Hook

Verse 2

let' make it hot
one breath one shot
follow my flow
let this beat blow
let it grow within you soul
can you feel it??
this beat is what dreaming
alla night long
composing thoughts


non c'e' un perke' nessun pero'
scrivo quello che sento
diretto e grezzo
strappo fulmini al cielo
spiego le mie ali al mondo
lacrime nere che toccano il fondo

il mio animo diserta
in una vita che decapita
lacrima su pagina
uno sfondo che sbiadisce
le strisce di speranza
a cucire sogni in una stanza
bada sono solo una goccia di rabbia
dispersa nell'immenso di questa strada
questa barre sono cio' che ho
queste rime sono cio' che sono lo son
on provare a fermarmi no


here is the translation:

there is no why no but,
I write what I feel
pure and raw
I rip off thunders from the sky
I spread my wings to the world
Black teardrops that kiss the bottom
my soul suffers
In a life that takes my breath away
teardrops on these pages
a background that fades away
the stripes of hope
sewing dreams in a fucking room
damn,I'm just drop of anger
lost in the vastness of this road
these bars are What I have left
these rhymes are what I am inside
so don't try to stop me




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2 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:20 pm

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common guys any feeds???has anyone heard it??

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3 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:45 pm

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I like the verses n all.. bt hooks got wierd. too much autotune wafi. and the autotune sounds so vague cant understand the words....it shud b sharper. i'll get technical later ..jz droppin by now...good work.. bt still a lot of room for improvement...

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4 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:04 pm

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TheRiddler wrote:I like the verses n all.. bt hooks got wierd. too much autotune wafi. and the autotune sounds so vague cant understand the words....it shud b sharper. i'll get technical later ..jz droppin by now...good work.. bt still a lot of room for improvement...
thanks man...I think it's due to the overdubs that the hook sounds so weird...what if I mix it again without the overdubs??

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5 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:22 am

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Ok I remade the hooks...I mixed them properly and now they are Far way clear and sharp then the last one...the file is updated...thanks riddler for pointing that out...and if you have time time check it out now and let me know if it's ok now...

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6 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Thu Jun 03, 2010 1:48 am

Castic M!k

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The verses waz alright bt the hook waz badly mixed (I am takin abt the previous 1 ) i think u use too much autotune .

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7 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:22 am

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Castic M!k wrote:The verses waz alright bt the hook waz badly mixed (I am takin abt the previous 1 ) i think u use too much autotune .

yeah man...but I think the current version is ok...please someone check it out and tell me if it's ok now..and drop some feeds!

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8 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Thu Jun 03, 2010 11:43 am

Slaught Daddy

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lyrics....it ws gud bt try sum literary words...might sound gud

beat....choose em more well..this is sum kind of beat I wudnt wana make a track on

verse....umm i think u need to work on ur accent n clarity ...flow is gud though bt dun copy anyone..i felt u copied others' flow here n there

hooks....u gotta do better man..this is wat attracts people in a song..

so work on it...though ur improvin...keep up at it

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9 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Thu Jun 03, 2010 12:56 pm

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Slaught Daddy wrote:lyrics....it ws gud bt try sum literary words...might sound gud

beat....choose em more well..this is sum kind of beat I wudnt wana make a track on

verse....umm i think u need to work on ur accent n clarity ...flow is gud though bt dun copy anyone..i felt u copied others' flow here n there

hooks....u gotta do better man..this is wat attracts people in a song..

so work on it...though ur improvin...keep up at it
thanks man for the feeds..I'll keep that in mind...I'll do better...anyway can you be more specific bout who I copied??

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10 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:20 am

Slaught Daddy

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mc shaq? thats wat i felt

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11 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:34 am

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Slaught Daddy wrote:mc shaq? thats wat i felt
...lol....now I have a reason to suicide...how the heck you felt shaq??ok now I gotta change my flow...lol there people that thinks that I copied Banxploid...lol...even though I never heard a single track from them and neither I listen to MC shaq...I don't listen bengali rappers...I strictly listen Italian rap and few american rappers...so I really don't know If I sounded like em or not....

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12 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Sat Jun 05, 2010 3:14 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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hook was nice Smile but ken jani kan e ektu beshi lage Sad...guess a lil too much auto tune...

verses e flow n energy r notably good Very Happy verse 3 e ektu nervous hoye giye ektu flow ta gesilo Razz..

overall a very good track Smile hoping to some more dope shit lyk dis Very Happy

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13 Re: "Tarar Dike" by Wafi [DEFINITIVE VERSION] on Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:43 pm

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ZX l)@ G@lvl3r wrote:hook was nice but ken jani kan e ektu beshi lage ...guess a lil too much auto tune...

verses e flow n energy r notably good verse 3 e ektu nervous hoye giye ektu flow ta gesilo ..

overall a very good track hoping to some more dope shit lyk dis
thanks man!!apriciate it!!!nd yeah this time the hook was bad...I'm thinking on doing better next time...thanks man

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