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The-$tunerzz Ft. Mogol Shomraht [The New Level]

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lilnax

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The-$tunerzz Ft. Mogol Shomraht

Track Name : Shadhinota

Link : http://hulkshare.com/9kl4z5p4xgy0

1st Verse : A.. Khan

2nd Verse : Mogol Shomraht

3rd Verse : Naxta

Song Mixed and Mastered By ''Naxta''[Mogol Mixed His Won part]

plz leave some comment
Peace

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LIl BanNEr

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NOt Bad...valoi lagLO.....liKE the hookz.. Smile

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lilnax

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thanks Bro

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LIl BanNEr

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Smile

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Hook is catchy.iLike.
First two verses were in correct form in terms of delivery,emotions,bars and flow.Legible and comprehensible spitting by both.I digged the guy on verse 2,his vocals got a grudge metal vibe which is appropriate to use in this type of content.
Verse 3 had flow problems which caused the song to reach a negative gradient.Should've been more clearer and comprehensible.Try to stick to the normal rhyme pattern rather than twisting/flipping/multi-rhyming unless you are able to make the listeners comprehend your bars completely.But i would say these are just minor issues you should clarify as soon as possible.See some potential in you guys.Decent job done!


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AKProductions


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i digged the swagg of the second rapper. who is it? he stood out to me. his ancholik style gave it the added flava.

first rapper was good too. i cud see wat third rapper tried..but delivery and concepts weren't fully developed but still props for trying it. the beat is the hottest thing in the track though. good job guys! u got potentials. just reduce dB of the instrumental by 0.5 or .75. i'm downloadin' this shit.

4/5

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can u guys plz give me the source of the beat? i wanna download the beat too.

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kinda liked it....nyc hooks

verse 1: wz pretty gud...

verse 2: killed it.....

verse 3: jst if u were 'more' on tha beat ...it wd hv sounded sooo much betta.....it went off beat in several places

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AKProductions wrote:can u guys plz give me the source of the beat? i wanna download the beat too.
oh yes me too!The beat is hot.


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the beat is frm HS traxx n beat name is back down Smile

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lilnax

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Thanks 4 u comment Brothers .....
@PRO thanks 4 ur advice or wad eva u say next tym i will try ma best.......

@Demonic....... Thanks

@ AK ""Slaught"" Got the source

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its eazy to judge Its HArd to Do
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Demonic

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yo nax....i kept on hearin this all way 2 ma uni 2day...gr8 job on tha mixin...and tha lyrix u wrote were pretty tyt...along wit tha tongue twistin thing u wanted 2 do...jst of it were more on tha beat...it wud hv sounded sooo much betta...Very Happy

nw....i dunno if u wud listen 2 me...bt...u gt a nyc texture in ur voice...stop tryna do tha fast thing...rap it slow...rap it hard..rap it with a depth...fast rap dznt mean gud rap...ait...hope u get wat um sayin...

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loved da chorus....

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WolFizzLA

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digged this... moghol shamrat murked it... liked his style, the 1st rapper seemed good enough, 3rd verse had some flaws... flow was a bit twitchy but potential was there, n yeah the beat was hot! all in all... it gets a 'bigg up' from me... 1

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lilnax

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@Demonic
Thanks and i got u man ...

and thanks to all afro

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mc shanz

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I also think as PRO n AK 1st 2 rappers are tight n they got good flow n ryt emotions but 3rd rapper need to improve i felt he went off beat some places but yeah i like this track (Y)

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Octa

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wow..finally some non-crap in DR... i'm likin dis track..hook is catchy yes...quality seems decent too...verse 1 was gudd overall...so was verse 2...da crush-delivery made it stand out in da crowdd..sumn not so easy to do...verse 3 was decent too...lacked da hype nd delivery at da start..bt caught up sooner or later i ges...fairly decent one overall brothers..keep wrking... (y)

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lilnax

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@ OCTA Thanks Bro .....
@ Shanz thanks 4 ur advice .....
peace geek

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