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Two Cents

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1 Two Cents on Tue May 04, 2010 7:56 am

Hypothetikal


Owns Da Hood
Owns Da Hood
It is what it is could have been better I guess. Feedback much appreciated.

4shared.com/audio/V2EX3CXj/Two_cents_rough.html



lyrics:

Two cents
On a train of thought
Flipped across the track to cause the brain to spark
Two cents
Words hit like bullets
A million in the chamber let my brain pull it
Two cents
The word is born
And I will spit it until it hurts and these words are gone

Ready aim fire
Put this through the wire
My words bounce back like Iím preaching to a Choir
An open book spoken word open hook broken nerves
Token look smoking herbs,
Grass is greener on the other side hoping verbs
Donít take affirmative action
While the full stop period still lacks attraction,
Compound syllabuls blown into fractions
Punctuation situation every time I get too patient
Sickest with the incubation
Premature nouns that sound profound
Pound for pound Iím going ounce for ounce
Levitate it off the ground then I bounce it down
A question for the masses
Every time I capture
Exclamation chapters
Pages of phrases hidden between brackets
Can you comprehend the tenses that I packet
Food for thought no preservatives added

Two cents
On a train of thought
Flipped across the track to cause the brain to spark
Two cents
Words hit like bullets
A million in the chamber let my brain pull it
Two cents
The word is born
And I will spit it until it hurts and these words are gone


I need to state
Conjunctions that are made
So many send me coal in to trade
The winter for the heat hoodwinked and betrayed
Blink til I drop tears with ink on a page
I quote commas like Im bringing grammar to life
Pause for a second then like a hammer it strikes
nail on the head
Your missions are pointless like brail for the deaf
slash ale on the breath that you fail to reject
I succeed in proposing, prepositional plurals
Go against the grain like Im living in the rural
Obama brought change not enough for a Euro
Human life beside hyphens subject to Zero
Objective adjectives blood paints a mural
So crystal clear like a conflict diamond possessive hypocrisy
I donít want to go above heads like apostrophes

Two cents
On a train of thought
Flipped across the track to cause the brain to spark
Two cents
Words hit like bullets
A million in the chamber let my brain pull it
Two cents
The word is born
And I will spit it until it hurts and these words are gone

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2 Re: Two Cents on Tue May 04, 2010 2:54 pm

mc shanz

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Micnificent!
Micnificent!
I like this 1......

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3 Re: Two Cents on Wed May 05, 2010 9:51 pm

Mode Silver


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Divine Poster
i'm digging this.. very dope lyrics. the beat could've been harder tho, sounds very low-fi. keep at it man!

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4 Re: Two Cents on Thu May 06, 2010 1:35 pm

Slaught Daddy

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Micnificent!
Micnificent!
the track's tight man!!!! step up into sum big things Very Happy

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5 Re: Two Cents on Thu May 06, 2010 8:45 pm

Castic M!k

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Official Rhymer
AWSUM MAN LIK THIS

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6 Re: Two Cents on Thu May 06, 2010 11:43 pm

Dope track ma man! Awesum beat!...I wish it was louder though.....

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7 Re: Two Cents on Fri May 07, 2010 12:06 pm

TheRiddler

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Official Rhymer
gud stuff! bt yz it so ... i donno... low quality sound?

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8 Re: Two Cents on Fri May 07, 2010 12:27 pm

Wafi

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Official Rhymer
th track was dope but there was something missing...like maybe a good mixing or vocal amplitude and dominance over the beat..I don know...any dope track if it wasn't for this little thing...

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9 Re: Two Cents on Sat May 08, 2010 3:18 am

Wafi wrote:th track was dope but there was something missing...like maybe a good mixing or vocal amplitude and dominance over the beat..I don know...any dope track if it wasn't for this little thing...

yeah thass rite! I say REMASTER it bro! Gonna be DOPER THAN IT IS NOW!!!

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10 Re: Two Cents on Sat May 08, 2010 5:47 am

Hypothetikal


Owns Da Hood
Owns Da Hood
lol ok will post up the remastered one soon

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11 Re: Two Cents on Sat May 08, 2010 5:06 pm

Hypothetikal wrote:lol ok will post up the remastered one soon

THNX! we r waiting!

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12 Re: Two Cents on Mon May 10, 2010 9:26 am

Hypothetikal


Owns Da Hood
Owns Da Hood
it might take a while tho.. my Unis ending next month so end of semester madness right now

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13 Re: Two Cents on Wed May 19, 2010 10:47 pm

ZX l)@ G@lvl3r

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too dope brigga Very Happy, dope lyrix, dope beat, dope flow, but most of all, dope acappella Very Happy...too good man, keep it up, jus improve the sound quality next tym, other than that, can't stop listening to it Razz

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