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Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK]

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1 Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Sun May 02, 2010 9:41 pm

Soultic Blaze

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sorry people it took me a long time to release a new track ..but finally
i m done .



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Lyrics



[Hook]

Now you’re gone, my life is incomplete, my heart feels so weak, I don’t
know where to run, cause you were the one. I gave you all I had, you
left me on my own, I promised you my life, but now you’re gone.



[Verse 1]

Now u r gone my life is incomplete what the things I have done were bad
to treat. Such a life we had were broken into piece just for my f**king
deeds. You cried a lot but never saw the way u loved me, missing the
days when u held me ,remember the days when we looked at the sky said a
lot to keep it alive. Holding ur hand by the side yeah yeah tears from
ur eyes as life changes by like a drunken beer I’ have fallen into ur
eye give me a chance to clear it by countless days as it passes by
heartless life without a fight what do u think I’m dying to get a part
of ur life



[Hook]

Now you’re gone, my life is incomplete, my heart feels so weak, I don’t
know where to run, cause you were the one. I gave you all I had, you
left me on my own, I promised you my life, but now you’re gone.





[Verse 2]

This is from the heart when I say love is like a art every time when I
see ur face I feel close to my heart. This pain inside me is more than
urz . Everything that u do in front of me falls like a agony. you r so
close to me still feels liek far from me all the things that were gone I
was standing on ,when I look at ur eye I see the past a on for the
everything we went nd on.All the tears drops tht fell for me all the
silent ni8 tht went 4 me I cn say it all were I want it to be but I luv u
baby girl more than me.All the hell tht we went through still standing
strong still close to my heart were I cn feel it every day why don’t u
see I can feel it every day life caching life feel it every time

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2 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Sun May 02, 2010 9:59 pm

Wafi

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homie, I'm in no position to judge...take it as an advice...the only thing that I really apreciated was the hook...awsum hook...but the verse...you need to improve delivery,you lack in flow and a little in pronunciation...and yeah you need to put some double layer...and remember the mixing...the hook is perfectly mixed and mastered but how come the verses are in bad shape homie???never mind homie...I'm not judging couse neither I'm a super star rapper here...so...try your best and you'll improve just like I'm trying hard to improve...

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3 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Sun May 02, 2010 11:15 pm

[P][R][O]

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Wafi wrote: the hook is perfectly mixed and mastered but how come the verses are in bad shape homie???
point of information:this is an instrumental with hook Smile


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4 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Mon May 03, 2010 12:09 am

mc shanz

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Need to work on delivery,lyric and flow was ok nthn special !

Huge space to improve...Besta luck !

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5 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Mon May 03, 2010 3:01 pm

Wafi

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[P][R][O] wrote:
Wafi wrote: the hook is perfectly mixed and mastered but how come the verses are in bad shape homie???
point of information:this is an instrumental with hook
LOL...hahahahah....LOL...

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6 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Wed May 05, 2010 12:18 am

Soultic Blaze

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Wafi wrote:homie, I'm in no position to judge...take it as an advice...the only thing that I really apreciated was the hook...awsum hook...but the verse...you need to improve delivery,you lack in flow and a little in pronunciation...and yeah you need to put some double layer...and remember the mixing...the hook is perfectly mixed and mastered but how come the verses are in bad shape homie???never mind homie...I'm not judging couse neither I'm a super star rapper here...so...try your best and you'll improve just like I'm trying hard to improve...

tnx 4 the advice ..will take tht nd will try my best next time ..BTW the hook was instrumental

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7 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Wed May 05, 2010 12:20 am

Soultic Blaze

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mc shanz wrote:Need to work on delivery,lyric and flow was ok nthn special !

Huge space to improve...Besta luck !


will work on my delivery n will improve

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8 Re: Blaze-Now Your're Gone [NEW TRACK] on Wed May 05, 2010 12:44 am

Wafi

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Soultic Blaze wrote:
mc shanz wrote:Need to work on delivery,lyric and flow was ok nthn special !

Huge space to improve...Besta luck !


will work on my delivery n will improve
That's the attitude homie!!!

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