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Shunno Akash----Wafi

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1 Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:58 am

Wafi

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Whass up people???
this time I'm back with a bangla track...
worked very hard on this so please check it out and tell me....
4shared.com/audio/LJhSXbvy/Wafi-Shunno_Akash.html

The beats is downloaded,mixind mastering recording lirycs and shit are all made by me...click and enjoy!!!

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2 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:05 pm

Wafi

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Here are the lyrics...
hook
Ei shunno akasher dike
Amar ei monta bhije
shei moner kotha gulo
like bheshe beray
Ei shunno akasher dike
shey ratrir bheja konte
dilam tomake ei akashe lekha gaan

Verse 1
Ami akash pataler maje ure ure bheshe beray
ratrer bheja konto take ke akash take khule dekai
bristir bheja meghe ami jule jule harie jay
Amar mon ta ke prithibike leke dekai
Ami shei meghla akasher ontor
ei faka ratrar ondho ondhokarer spondon
tarar ujjolima die banai binodhon
bheshe jao amar ei hather leka konto
amar ei shunno faka akashe roilo ahoban
ofuranto tara theke chushenao pran
ami lukano kotha ke shotto kori
amar konto die tomar mon gula ke bhori
jate ei shunno faka prithibita nothun kichu chene
jate ei ojana dukkher mon ta nothun kichu like
shei bhorer ujjol alor shure ami choli
shei ojanar konte ami kota gulo ke tomader ke boli

Hook

Verse 2

ami ei shunno faka akasher ekti chotto onksho
tarar araler majhe liki amar moner koshto
ami shey bheja shurer ondhokarer chondo
ei jhumonto ratrir shantir rokto
kot je kota je bheshe jay
shey akasher ontore muche jay jay
thakena ar kono kichu bujena manena
ei monta shadinotar bishhashe thamena
chetonar majhe chondo gulo ke liki
amar konte akasher theke pore brishti
rokter bheja leka die ami bornona je kori
ofuranto koshter sritir majhe ami chori
ei akasher mone mishiee kota gulo ke pori
shurer arale ami ei chonde bondhi
ojana kothar majhe tomra kor furti
mitthar prithibir majhe ami holam shotti kotha

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3 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:34 pm

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lyrics were good. hooks were's well executed...
verses.. flow was good..bt too many words on each bar...so it feels like u forced the words into the bar in a hurry...
i'd suggest u practice and stick to english bt ur bangla is good too...
Overall it's not a bad track considerin ur only a starter... keep up the good work..

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4 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:39 pm

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Also... dont do everythin in 1 breathe.... if necessary do 2 or even 1 bar at a time... and try double layer recordin...

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5 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:57 pm

Wafi

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thanks man...but I'm kinda ashamed for my english so i'll be practicing my english without showing of anyithing...when I'll do something presentable I'll post it in here...and bout the bars and staff you're right...the next time I'll try something slow and smooth let's see what happens...and the double layer were hot but I forgot to push up the volume I'm gonna remaster it with more volume on double layer...

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6 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:49 pm

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Nice lyric,nice flow n nice hooks.....nice track !

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7 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:11 pm

Wafi

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mc shanz wrote:Nice lyric,nice flow n nice hooks.....nice track !
thanks man...apriciate it!!

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8 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Wed Apr 28, 2010 2:09 pm

Wafi

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Guys give some feeds please...tell me what you think please!!any criticism wuold be apreciated

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9 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Thu Apr 29, 2010 5:09 am

Wafi

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Common guys some feed and criticism will help...It doesn't take much to click a link and check it out and tell that I'm an idiot...at least tell what you people think so I can do better...

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10 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Thu Apr 29, 2010 3:17 pm

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vocal dB of the singing shd go up. listen to wat riddler said...and overtime u'll develop emotions and delivery skills. it was overall too linear (u gotta put emphasis on certain words and pitch up and down ur emotions with them)..but it wasn't bad. good lyrics by the way!

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11 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Fri Apr 30, 2010 4:50 am

Wafi

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AKProductions wrote:vocal dB of the singing shd go up. listen to wat riddler said...and overtime u'll develop emotions and delivery skills. it was overall too linear (u gotta put emphasis on certain words and pitch up and down ur emotions with them)..but it wasn't bad. good lyrics by the way!
thanks fo' the advice I'll keep it in mind fo' my next song...
@ TheRiddler man I always hear bout people sayin' that one should stay clear on the bar and staff...but I didn't figured yet what the heck it is...I mean how does it works this bar things and stuffs???maybe that's my problem couse usually I just write a song and spit it without takin in account these kind of rules could you be so patient to explain me??I'm kinda ashamed for my ignorance but please explain it to me I'll be glad...

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12 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Fri May 07, 2010 4:20 am

F.L.O.

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dont lissn 2 riddler hes wack LMAO...

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13 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Fri May 07, 2010 5:11 am

Demonic

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spectacular lyrix.....

and a word of advice: don listen 2 flo...he is gay...

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14 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Fri May 07, 2010 6:18 am

F.L.O.

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demonic

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15 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Fri May 07, 2010 8:54 pm

Castic M!k

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F.L.O. wrote:dont lissn 2 riddler hes wack LMAO...

NO he aint

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16 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Sat May 08, 2010 1:58 pm

Wafi

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Demonic wrote:spectacular lyrix.....

and a word of advice: don listen 2 flo...he is gay...
thanks man!!



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17 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Sat May 08, 2010 3:37 pm

AxZA_FLyology

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prolly its ur first track...not bad for ur first track...work on ur delivery
a bit..and keep practicing

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18 Re: Shunno Akash----Wafi on Sun May 16, 2010 6:59 pm

The HooK is spectacular bro....Glad to have u in my crew....

we Re-Run this shit muthafukas!!!

there will be more better things frm us!!!

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