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[[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It!

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1 [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:02 pm

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Hey guyz im back with an english track... bro's i need your comments on this trac because a famous italian rapper wants me in this song... so heres the link: http://www.4shared.com/file/254349158/3ace2f45/MC_NS_-_Burnin_City__raw_Demo_.html

Verse:

from the begining never been hated never been blind//
fuckin hoe's in da city wanna fuck me from behind//
producers not givin anything neither a fly//

everythings against us like political lies//
another nigga talks// another nigga dies//

born 18years ago untill today the probs multiplies//
livin in this city is like livin in the darkness you kno why?//
because the fame is availlable only in NY//

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2 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Fri Apr 02, 2010 4:37 am

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-.- DR r ki hoise?

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3 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:52 am

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your flow i guess wz good. pronounciation needs improvement. adlibs were kinda awkward. smthns missin...i dono what... maybe someone else can help u out.

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4 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:53 am

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your flow i guess wz good. pronounciation needs improvement. adlibs were kinda awkward. smthns missin...i dono what... maybe someone else can help u out.

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5 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:53 am

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your flow i guess wz good. pronounciation needs improvement. adlibs were kinda awkward. smthns missin...i dono what... maybe someone else can help u out.

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6 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:51 pm

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TheRiddler wrote:your flow i guess wz good. pronounciation needs improvement. adlibs were kinda awkward. smthns missin...i dono what... maybe someone else can help u out.

thnks riddler more feedbacks guys

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7 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:09 am

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-.- ''maybe someone else can help u out'' keu nai -.-''

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8 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:14 am

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flow was..idk it was okay..but delivery wasn't (ur emotion was there..but again not executed properly imo)..adlib issues as riddler said. i didn't rlly feel the lyrics..sick beat though..

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9 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Mon Apr 05, 2010 9:12 pm

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not bad..

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10 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:14 pm

Castic M!k

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GUd pronouncation need a improve

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11 Re: [[[MC NS - Burnin City]]] Check It! on Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:28 am

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AKProductions wrote:flow was..idk it was okay..but delivery wasn't (ur emotion was there..but again not executed properly imo)..adlib issues as riddler said. i didn't rlly feel the lyrics..sick beat though..

flow was.. idk? XD XD thnks ak

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