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FORSAKEN (HAITI) by AK Productions ft. THE RIDDLER and SHA-T

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TheRiddler

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Me AK and SHA-T been workin really hard on dis... This one's for the victims of Haiti...God bless em...


FORSAKEN ( HAITI DEDICATION )
by
AK Production ft. THE RIDDLER and SHA-T


LYRICS - AK Productions
Verses - THE RIDDLER
HOOKZ - SHA-T
Production (Beat + beat mixing and mastering) - AK Productions
MIXING and MASTERING - red]THE RIDDLER ]]]

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[[[ Verse 1 ]]]

I'm sittin' alone with the coffee on ma side
Bored out of my mind thinkin' how I spent last(the) night
and then it happens
in just a quick second the skyyy
seems to fall
as I ran through corridors
somebody please tell me what da hell goin' on
as I can't even think if it's dusk or dawn

then the walls near by (came crashin down)
with no where to go I try to scream and groan
can I make it down the stairs?
"who knows?" "who cares?"
i cud smell danger in da air like a friggin nitemare
it's all happenin' so fast that i can't even get to think
I keep tryin' a blink but I keep seein' aaaall pink
I start feelin' da pain running all ova ma veins
and I knew I cudnt fight there was no way to win
this darkness crashiní down on ma course
I got no more chances as it jz keeps gettiní worse

[[[
HOOKZ ]]]

lord...i feel like um all dead
a string holding my body to my soul
my life passing away
give me one mo chance (gimme)
to breath



[[[ VERSE 2 ]]]

Baaaam comes the ceiling falliní right on ma head
Oh the pain! Ohh the painn..as I falliní on ma chest
The moment I wake up Iím all in the rubbles
So gladd Iím alive and didnít hav to crumble
I am trapped so trapped who knows where am I?
Oh God, is this how u wanted me to die?
A death so painful sends a chill down ma bones
Oh no, is that a little girl trapped like me all alone?
I didnít care that Iím dyiní but her innocent eyes
got me teariní up like Iím so so alive

Somebody please help! Please help her out!
I canít take it no more as I throw one more shout.

had no doubts about the faith deep in ma heart
little angel sufferin shez like a star
i ask why? Lord why? what's the reason behind this?
answers silent as always only treason behind this

[[[ HOOKZ ]]]

lord...i feel like um all dead
a string holding my body to my soul
my life passing away
give me one mo chance (gimme)
to breath


[[[ 3rd verse ]]]

My eyes start to blink as Iím lookiní around me
The water. on my face is like a golden sea!
Canít feel my body but I know Iím alive
Thank God for giviní me a brand new life!
What happened to that girl I try to think.
Tryiní a shout at my vocals bt it starts to shrink


People takiní me to shelter as I try to make Ďem stoop
I owed her my life i just cudn let her drop

The smell of the corpses and the cries of despair
Brings tears down my face as I keep lookiní for her

Hundreds helpiní out and thousands out to nurse
But ppl dyiní still God plz kill the curse
Days passiní but the night just resides
Could YOU spare some dollars to save a little girlís life?

cud u?....

OUTRO THE RIDDLER

A proclamation to this world.
Earthquake..you got NOTHING on us no more.
Cause Today
we ARE united as one soul.

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F.L.O.

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Riddler u cudv writtten better lyrics...hook was too loww...beat was good...mixing was good..out

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Da Upload

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Loved it .!!

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theD.A

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luvd it..luvd u riddler...but sha-t cudv done betta

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AKProductions


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hook was slightly low..but again there was just no way at that point for us to catch that lol.

but about the whole chorus..i don't wanna give any excuses or whatever..but he could only record it once and we had to go with it since he doesnt have access to internet, pc and all that. but I'm still happy to what he did with the given circumstances.



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TraK-STA

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havent heard da track yet so m a drop ma feeds a bit later

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TraK-STA

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loved the track!! riddler was great !! sha t was asum riddler can do way better loved the beat!! the whole track was assum:D

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mc shanz

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This is a good track ! Riddler was good...Didn't feel the hooks..
Beat is crazy,gr8 mixin...Tight 1 Very Happy

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Octa

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beat is gud..drums cudda hit harder

i'm nt big on emotions maslf...but riddler was half way there wit emotions..altho flow was "abrupt" and not continuouos...but i ges a.k set dat up fo em...

sha-t's is MADDD...MADD OUTTA PRACTICE DAT ISS....get yo game up man..wtf

lyricz were okay and touchy at partz

is dis ur new mike saadh bhai? definitely upped. da quality for good.. (y)

props fo a noble cause...

God Bless Us All.

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LOOL! Facebook GOUP!

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AKProductions


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octa...yeah dude i was shooting for that sorta flow after i realized how the first verse will flow..sorta like one line at a time with a story-telling/poetry sorta if it makes any sense. i tried not to put too much emphasis on any parts of the beat except the strings at times due to the overall 'feeling' of the song u know..but thanks for ur comments. btw, u shd spank Sha-T for being so out of practice.

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the beat was dope.. can't really find any serious flaw in it... it flowed very well. the hook wasn't executed right.. i didn't dig it. riddle had the right emotion throughout the track but lyrically it seemed lackluster... it would've been interesting if you rapped each verse from 3 different perspective. like verse 1 the victim, verse 2 a dude who's part of the rescue mission and verse 3 someone watching it all unfold on a tv. that's how i would've approached it. but anyway, it's still a good song. keep it up guys!

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that's wassup! that idea never crossed my mind. that wud hv been really cool. i was all bogged down with the thought that if it's in all one person it'd sound more 'personal'. but i rlly like ur idea!

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TheRiddler

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thankx all u guyz fo da feeds.... n yea i actually like mode's idea... Smile

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Castic M!k

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great job riddler

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Rh Rakzo BurnXai

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Ak Like da beat , bt da drums cud beat harder..still nice wrk man
Sha-T: awsum hook man ...
The Riddler: I'll just say ''Respect'' Bro u earned it.. Hats off

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xefer

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um a crazzzy fan of dis beat from da begenin...u kno ak.. lol
riddler!! u was awesome!! i loved ur part!!
sha-t u cud do better man... i mean chorus cud ve been more touchy..cuz dis whole beat is damnn heart touchin... gr8 job guyz.. Very Happy

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MC NS

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loved the trackkkkkk! riddler n sha-t you are 2 of my fav singers/rappers Respect

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xefer wrote:um a crazzzy fan of dis beat from da begenin...u kno ak.. lol
riddler!! u was awesome!! i loved ur part!!
sha-t u cud do better man... i mean chorus cud ve been more touchy..cuz dis whole beat is damnn heart touchin... gr8 job guyz.. Very Happy

we had to go with Sha-t coz sumone had issues with.....:p lol it's okay though Very Happy

oh yes..i know u like this beat A LOT. haha thanks for that. and as i said again...i wudn't wanna make the drum patterns hit louder coz i wanted complete focus on the vocals. but thanks everyone for their comments.

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xefer

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thnx for understandin man... i really appreciate.. Smile

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AKProductions


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CONGRATS High ROLLERS!

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good track man... Mode Im sorry man but Ima have to steal that idea of urz lol

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thanks bro! Riddler and I really put a lot of effort into this song. I wanted very very specific emotions, flow, depth etc. etc. etc. and props to Riddler for enduring all those thousands of suggestions and criticisms lol.

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TheRiddler

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Thankx all u guyz...wzn on for a while... glad everybody liked it....

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xefer wrote:thnx for understandin man... i really appreciate.. Smile

np. hope to hear more tracks from u and ur bf I guess?

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