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My First Production: Reverie [Demo]

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1 My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:50 am

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Yeah, well, check it out.

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2 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:14 am

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not bad at all for ur first beat..keep it up dude! i can give u technical comments but i get real harsh when i'm technical lol. but regardless it's good..jst keep doing it and u'll get better iA.

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3 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:24 am

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Get harsh, no problem. As long as, it's helpful.

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4 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:48 am

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ok now i donno much abt makin beats bt my honest opinion wud b... im surprised at how gud dat sounded considerin dat itz ur 1st beat... i lyk dis kinda rnb-ish stuff... sum bass notes wudve been nice on da loops and maybe sum smooth kicks wid da bass... keep up da gud work man...

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5 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:48 am

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u need sum constant kicks...good melodies tho

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6 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:46 pm

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I did use a constant kick, but, it was "light". You'll feel it on the sub-woofer. And, thanx for the reply guy(s). FL is awesome. I'll put my max effort on my future one(s), that's when I'll need the feedback the most.

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7 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:01 am

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main problem: beat sounds linear. no vertical depth. so work on effects. panning/freq placement. dont overdo it.

claps were overused. try to make a solid drumline..which was my major prob for a LOONG time until flo started commented "no drumline" in every single of my beat lol. no layerings/mixing is there. arrangement and progressions r weak too. u cud try to drop the beat too. check out this beat of mine and see how many times i sorta changed stuff of and things like that...

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8239271

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8 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:57 pm

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That's what I'm talking about. Thanx.
I'll look into this again when I make the next one.

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9 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:03 am

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yep np man! gl on ur next beat. jst mssg me if u need any help/suggestions. i don't claim to be all that good or anything (unfortunately most ppl in this site thinks i'm a fake wannabe producer...which i prolly am but i never show off for that) but i can lend u couple of suggestions here and there.

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10 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:37 am

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dont take advice from AK the boy sux! LOL

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11 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:39 am

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AK sux so bad.....nah man...who m i kiddin...dat guy is awesum....jst chked out his beats.....but dat doznt stop him frm bein a complete "blowjob"....lol.....dat doznt make sense...but sum kid on DR called me dat.......

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12 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:46 am

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stole it from russel peters da cunt

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13 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:49 am

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who u callin a cunt ?

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14 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:50 am

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whereever i see FLO commenting...Demonic is right behind...tomgo bhetor bepar ta ki? we can help u guys and buy u a bigger closet so dont worry abt coming out of it yet....lol.

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15 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:07 am

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lol fuck man ak stole ma words

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16 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:20 pm

F.L.O.

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wherevers AK thers Riddler....i dont even wana kno wtf u 2 hairy bastards are getting up2 cos thats gona scar my life forever..

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17 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:49 pm

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AKProductions wrote:whereever i see FLO commenting...Demonic is right behind...tomgo bhetor bepar ta ki? we can help u guys and buy u a bigger closet so dont worry abt coming out of it yet....lol.

tha fuck!!!

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18 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:31 pm

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LMFAO! peeing on hairy people is the SHIT! =D

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19 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:30 am

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AK thinks hes the shit,
he pisses me so off by acting like a god of knowledge.

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20 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:06 am

F.L.O.

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man ur 14 get outa here..

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21 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:36 am

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lol flo cmon giv da guy a break lol

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22 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:59 am

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it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil..fyi....i AM the god of knowledge so pleas keep hatin' on me. Smile

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23 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:49 am

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den how come ur G for God ain capitalised lol

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24 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:53 am

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AKProductions wrote:it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil...if u didn't know..i AM the god of knowledge.


How dare you talk bowt sam,u aint even near his level..nor even mine.

Yo AK your rap is shit i rap pee,i am a wacker emcee\Cuz even your shit smells better than me Cool

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25 Re: My First Production: Reverie [Demo] on Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:55 am

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IDIOT wrote:
AKProductions wrote:it's amazing/creepy/wierd or whichever word is applicable for how i started to hv haters without having neither made any good/hit tracks nor as friday wud say "Old MC Sam" style stuff lol. Sharjil...if u didn't know..i AM the god of knowledge.


How dare you talk bowt sam,u aint even near his level..nor even mine.

Yo AK your rap is shit i rap pee,i am a wacker emcee\Cuz even your shit smells better than me Cool

aww so much love and hate for me. keep it up guys! i feel really touched. Very Happy

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