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***NEW--Sha-T and The Riddler collab.- Can't Say Goodbye!!!

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TheRiddler

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hey ppl wazzup....!!! thnkx to dr n pro for spreadin out my track "Angel". Hope y'all liked it...herez smthn new... finished ma examz n went on a trip 2 ctg. met Sha-T n da rest is history. herez the link and the lyrics..plz download it n plz leave feedback... made n recorded it in only a few hours so plz consider us!!...thankx

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1ST verse + Background bridges (THE RIDDLER)

(baby) BABY I WUD never wanna leave u alone
(everyday) EVERYDAY N EVERYNITE I cry i moan
(all alone) all alone on ma own i awatin auxillary states
(waidin) waidin on God 2 finally seal our fates

(never thought) never thought i wud hav 2 c dis day
(wen love) wen love n life would stand in each oders way
(left times) left times behind that make me recall
(in) in love with ma baby boo we'll never have a fall

i never thot u wud leave... never thot i'd have 2 give
never saw decisions dat made me grieve wad i received
i got nothin DAT I GOTTA sho...but iEA do luv u though...
million wordz a million scars 2 show u wad i'm here fo

and i luvd u...didn really think whether u loved me back
n i craved u ...din really kno wheder u were ok wid dat..
n i want u....don really kno whether the same u c...
n i need u...no baby no plz don leave me be

HOOKS (Sha-T)

I i'm the whos been goin insane..
I'm the one who always dealt with the pain
I luved u baby never want u 2 go...
I never ready 2 say goodbye...
ur smile is my daily sunshine
if ur not by me
aint no hope no dream no meanin of ma life

The ...The rain...The Meanin of ma life

2ND VERSE (Sha-T)

I CAN STILL REMEMBA THE DAY I SAW U
U WERE SO BEAUTIFUL GRL I MADE THE CHOICE DAT U WILL B MA BOO
U TOOK A LOT O TYM TO GIVE ME A CHANCE...BUT I WAITED TILL U UNDERSTAND
TO SEE WHU I AM WAT I FEEL N GET LL MA INTENTIONS....
I GOT U ON FACEBOOK....THEN IT PROMOTED TO MSN....
I GOT EEVEN LUCKIER WHEN I GOT TO CALL U ON UR CELL.....
THOT U WILL NEVA RECEVE IT....BUT GESS I WAS RONG....
CALLIN N ASKIN TO SING UR FAV SONG.....
BABY GRL WE MEET EACH OTHER STARTED GOIN OUT FO DATE
tym went by n u were home too late
OKHAY GRL ENUFF CHATTIN ITS TYM FO ME TO SAY
BE MA PRINCESS BABY....JUS SAY ITS OKHAY

3RD verse + Background bridges (THE RIDDLER)

(all in all) all in all in all dis a 1st grade story
(baby girl) baby girl plz b mine already said i'm sorry
(feelins fly) feelins fly passin by goin back 2 our 1st date
(how) how ws i supposed 2 kno dat itz already 2 late

(baby girl) baby girl therez a reason why i wanna make u mine
(i've looked) i've looked everywhere no better i can find
(luv u) luv u wid all ma life i hope u don mind
(itz) itz like u fell from the stars baby ur so divine

therez nothin left to show...everything has been ignored
every thot n every pain jz leaves me wantin more
if u knew wad i wud give... only for a chance to live...
each n every day girl itz gettin harder 2 breath...


ur face.... leaves me love bound n love struck
ur beauty ....leaves me earth bound n heart struck
ur glow...leaves me heavenly star struck
ur eyes...leaves me inadvertently soul struck

OUTRO(Sha-T):
Sha-T...Riddler....Collaboration

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Humayun Chowdhury

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prooly im da 1st downloader...cuz 4shared showing 0 DL

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TheRiddler

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yeap feedback plz!! Very Happy

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AKProductions


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hey dude, i just heard it. GREAT STUFF first off! Not gonna lie. I liked the track. Who made the beat between?
Okay, so for the first verse..or in fact for the whole track, can you lower down the dB level of the track and increase dB of vocals? I would just want to hear the vocals a bit more clearer. What vocal software did u use? Forge 9.0? anyway, just make it a little bit more clear I guess..a reverb will do.
So, yeah, that's my only complain...the vocals aren't completely as clean as it can be..but again u told that u guys did it in couple hours...so yeah..mixing and mastering aren't completel.
But i understand. Rapping/singing wise..this is one fire!
Good stuff i'm impressed! do you've youtube? imma subscribe to u if u do. lol

btw, check out ma track too now that I critiqued urs. Very Happy

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TheRiddler

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AKProductions wrote:hey dude, i just heard it. GREAT STUFF first off! Not gonna lie. I liked the track. Who made the beat between?
Okay, so for the first verse..or in fact for the whole track, can you lower down the dB level of the track and increase dB of vocals? I would just want to hear the vocals a bit more clearer. What vocal software did u use? Forge 9.0? anyway, just make it a little bit more clear I guess..a reverb will do.
So, yeah, that's my only complain...the vocals aren't completely as clean as it can be..but again u told that u guys did it in couple hours...so yeah..mixing and mastering aren't completel.
But i understand. Rapping/singing wise..this is one fire!
Good stuff i'm impressed! do you've youtube? imma subscribe to u if u do. lol

btw, check out ma track too now that I critiqued urs. Very Happy

Thankx a lot 4 da feedback dude...chekin out ur track ryt now. ...oh n the beat wz downloaded... 4 vocals we used Mixcraft...Audacity.....

thankx a lot man...

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Sharjil

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I thought it would take some time.you guys are fast =_=
GREAT STUFF tho Neutral =_=

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TheRiddler

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Sharjil wrote:I thought it would take some time.you guys are fast =_=
GREAT STUFF tho Neutral =_=

thankx sharjil... Surprised

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[P][R][O]

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i am not pleased with this as much as i was with ur 'Angel' track Riddler but the songs tite overall ....Riddler's vocals should have been increased,liked the hooks which went like a gentle breeze on my ears...Riddler's flow was gentle and sicK but a lil bit inc. in vocals shud've killed it!

and to sha-t,the zoo bwai lol...keep on workin bitch!!!u'll succeed alot and remmba we are related nah so oll da luv to ya [no fag lmao]


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TheRiddler

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[P][R][O] wrote:i am not pleased with this as much as i was with ur 'Angel' track Riddler but the songs tite overall ....Riddler's vocals should have been increased,liked the hooks which went like a gentle breeze on my ears...Riddler's flow was gentle and sicK but a lil bit inc. in vocals shud've killed it!

and to sha-t,the zoo bwai lol...keep on workin bitch!!!u'll succeed alot and remmba we are related nah so oll da luv to ya [no fag lmao]

ai thankx 4 da honest opnion pro...by "vocals" u mean the background vocals i put before each line rite?

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[P][R][O]

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nope....i meant your verse


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TheRiddler

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oh.... yea ..me n sha-T were all confused abt volume levels...we put the autotune up n we cudnt hear the verse ...we put the verse up cudnt hear the autotune lol.... Mad

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MC BANNER

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NIce track man.............
I lVe it.... 

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Biz-kidd

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Nyc track guys i liked it ....

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TheRiddler

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thankx a lot ppl... 4 da commentz.... more feedz plz..!

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Tha Young Prodigy

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Love this track right here.
Goin' straight to my iTouch :]

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crackpot

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ayo riddler remember me??? ne ways nice track....

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TheRiddler

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@theyoungprodigy: thankx man...wen u cumin up wid TRAX instead of remixes ? Mad been waidin so long 4 one 4rm u...
@crackpot. wazzzup!! thankx 4 da comment dude

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crackpot

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wc dude... check out ma track and time thakle comment mairo.... in spittin on mic section....

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R.m.N

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wo!!!!!!! nice stuff man!!!!!!!!!!!

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TheRiddler

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thenku!!

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G-AcE

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awsomE worRk duDE !!!

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G-AcE

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cnt get muh ears off it ! lol! realy nice work

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Slaught Daddy

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aha...........atlast u did it man......wit sha-t.... Very Happy gud 1.......workd real well bt as pro said ur verse volume level ws a bit low...odawise it is great work... bsta luck man...

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TheRiddler

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thankx 4 da feedz...glad u guyz liked it... Very Happy

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nylos_mentalmc

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awesum track =D

and sha-t bhaiya... boo??? Razz LOLZ

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