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Alright i've written up another 8 bars, have you sent yours to FLO, i'm about to as well.
Peace

Should i just post it up and you post it up immediatley afterwards? As in no using what your opponent said against him. No comebacks?

FBZ'S VERSE

*nothing should be taken personally[/b]

*texts in italic along with those closed in brackets -"[ ]","{ }","( )"- should not be read along the real text





wow...if that's yo' best, then yo' worst prolli defines you/

i made u lose once befo' en now its time for a number 2//[1]

i came back, but rhis time u spittin like a dead roast,/

Instead o' replying separate i'll burn yo' lines all with just one toast,//[2]

i dont care if your atheist, i still will send you to the ghost,/ (ghost meaning satan, meaning imma send em ta hell)

it'll be like kickin yo' ass, with defeat as yo' goalpost!//[3]

most, no i'd say all yo' rhymes/ are way behind ma time,/

buoy, you look lyk a caveman trynna construct a doctrine,//[4]

Rewind/, en make all me rhymes flow back en fourth yo' mind/

Until it re patterns yo' neurons en make em' all mine//[5]

i'll be like rain full of swords, sure to dismember,/

standin in da center,i'll be crushing yo' momma's production, like a lyrical blender,//[6] (momma's production meaning bangey himself)

i been hunting down emcees killing DeshiRhyme members,/

its cuz, many have done it bfore, en yo' next ta surrender//[7]

oh now I remember, yo' bangey, the same guy who beat me/

fuck no, in yo' dreams, thats one other dream u hav, besides impregnating britney// [8]

so u vote against me, then say yo' decision was wrong?/

u think u'll get homies that way, or maybe one u could live with, all nightlong,/ yearlong/ or may be lifelong!//[9]

Ding dong/, this is war yo, itsyk a game o' mahjongg,/ (mahjongg
is a game of Chinese origin usually played by four persons with 144
domino like pieces or tiles marked in suits, counters, and dice, the
object being to build a winning combination of pieces.)

next u'll be seen wearing a band saying "fbz's murdered me" instead o' "livestrong"!/[10]

u hit on aimz despite the fact that u hate em' !/

u put urself in trouble dawg, en now, trouble doubled to mayhem!//[11]

man! y u blabber bout ur damn improvement?/

u think u rilli did? be patient/ en let it come rite outta without ur external intention!//[12]

"oo...FLO added me,en PRO sez imma reporter/

but A1MZ's a bitch, he dont vote fo' me ,so he simple-E makes me rep go shorter!"//[13]

well enuf o' ur show-off, now put yo' crap talk into some paper!/

if yo' water,the heat from mah words is gonna turn u to vapour//[14]

I havent won quite-yet/, gotta get/ ppl in the mood and in the right 'mind-set'/

If you aint blind-yet/ i'll shine-text, shyte, im orredi 15 barz in, one more left ta talk bout yo' "upset"//[15]

BANGEY/ , u intentional-ly/ broke me 5 battle winning streak,/

that aint yo' job freak/, u sell tea/, telliing me/ not ta blow yo' identity/,well maybe i will, ur MIRZA AHMED ISPAHANI!//[16](bangey's family own the ispahani group o' industries, they own IISPAHANI MIRZAPUR TEA)



"fBz

ovrr en out"



[note:
whatever shit i said bout him saying that his decitions bout voting fo'
nNa was wrong en bout him talking wack bout aimz ,bout how FLO en all
praise him,bout the fact that he wanned to end my winning streak, the
fact that they sell tea as in they own a tea company, and his NAME was
absolutely factual! he mentioned most of this on msn messenger thrsday
night (31st July) {dont have the chat logs tho}! just to let the voters
know that all this shit was no random "blabbers" lmao!]



[b]
BANGEYS VERSE


[/b]Call his mamma, tell her to arrange his funeral,
Beat this bitch up leave him derranged and cynical;
Your arm, i'm gonna amputate,
So you can never masturbate, Yo mamma i'm gonna masticate,
Your head spinning, my lyrics so complex,
Nigga i'm winning, You keep working on your effects;
I'm disect F-B-Z like he an insect,
Leave your hood decked and wrecked;
You couldn't even suspect, cos nigga i'm perfect;
I'm lyrically flawless, i'm gorgeous,
Leave you clueless* like you was Alicia Silverstone*;
But you'v never boned so why do you shiver homes?
Your a cunt and no-one likes you,
Roll me a blunt and then maybe you can recite jew,
Watch me baptize and circumsise you,
Nigga i shit out less shit than you spit out,
Like an old man with gout, you can't get an erection,
Could never win an election, like a tv with bad reception,
This niggas brother gettin married, to a man he fancied,
While this fuck still suckin on dickweed;
fBz in need, of mental help, to fix his mental health,
Imma attack you with stealth and steal your wealth;
When you die, no one is gonna cry,
We gonna be celebratin the death of this nigga we hatin,
No debatin, your funeral? we elatin;
I want you to be a dead shit, yeah i said it;
I'm take this nigga and get him beheadid,
Not regret it, You one soft mother,
Never gonna get married like yo brother,
Just another, bitch walking into a brick wall,
Suck dick, call girl get all our sick sprawled;
I didn't hit you hard cos i didn't wanna murder-you,
Unknown fagget, before this verse no-one had even heard-of-you;

*Clueless is a famous movie that Alicia Silverstone starred in



VOTE UP NIGGAZ

DAMN FBZ =S...dis ain beef wen its a text battle witout beef u dont go personal =P..take it eazy U =P

Nice verse fBz. Better than i expected.

Edit : Empty

good battle....but rhyme scheme matters alot in battles...n FBZ da ghost n goal post rhyme reeli put me off...but Bangey was creative n had a good rhyme scheme..n hez verse was flowin more...had multies here n deyr...soo ima vote for

BANGEY...keep it up both of u...

Thanks for the vote.
Keep the votes coming in people!

FLO, for me, i thought the ghost, goalpost rhyme was arite...the one that really got me was the time/mind/mine one...because the word doctrine...
is pronounced dock-trin.

which sounds nothing like mind lol.

anywho, on to the vote,

both guys came out hard, and yeah, had bangey not said it, iw ouldn't have known a lot of ish was personal to be honest, though i agree with FLO's sentiments...so now i'm thinking...is there beef? lol...

but the sheer fact that bangey reacted to it, means that they were actually rather hard hitting, so despite the faux pas, the category is fBz's.

FLOW - Bangey (although the scheme seemed to differentiate a bit in your final 8 bars)
CREATIVITY- fBz - some pretty cool metaphor usage
VOCAB - Bangey
PUNCHES/PERSONALS: fBz
MULTIES: Bangey, but only slightly, as his were more consistently seen.

OVERALL: Bangey, you almost become a partial victim of your own reasoning, and that is...punches do kill...and honestly, had you not said anything, I'd have probably overlooked it and given you the win straight up, but your reaction made it slightly more difficult.

That said though, I still think you were better on this day, so you get my vote.

Good ish fBz, but yeah, lay off getting too personal.

So its Bnagey--2-0--FBZ .. I cant vote doesnt mean I cant speak...by da way..two of da active moderators of battle forum already voted so I guess speaking of everyday appreance Infmous is left...I never saw him vote !

lol bangey, i like how you edited your posts. now my comments look like crazy talk.

loser!

I doubt we will get any more moderators to vote. Barely any others ever vote in these threads.